The beginning is fine that is not the problem and I am not an expert to say that I saw something wrong, the protagonist is sent to another world and he is not surprised because just before God calls him and tells him that he performs the miracle, everything. It's okay there, but in the second chapter collapses for two simple reasons.

Main character first

For someone who created the game and is currently living, he has no idea of the main enemy of the story to at least fake his personality, not even a little bit. Then there are your sloppy questions and answers that go to your stupid butler.

2nd Justin (the butler)

Poor butler, in this novel about 600 IQs were taken away from him. Although this plays out quite well in the following chapters

Your master, the one who is afraid and is a great villain, tells you not to kill anymore when there is no reason.

Your master, the one who just wants to watch the world burn, asks you why he mistreats his people.

Your master, the one who never in these two years without butlers, asks you where are all the butlers?

Your master, the one who did not feel an iota of sorrow for the death of his family, asks about them after 5 years of death and suddenly begins to feel bad for them.

And you don't even realize his total personal change and that you only find out because he doesn't treat you badly. But the worst thing is how he accepts that nothing happened to his master and that he was not cursed by anyone is very absurd.

Justin: Sir, but you said YESTERDAY that you wanted to conquer the whole world.

The protagonist: is that people change from one day to the next, and I changed.

but then it improves the chapters, until the beginning of the last chapters 11 and 12 (which for me were the best of the moment). It only remains to know how the protagonist was saved and nothing more.

pd: for someone like the protagonist who felt Insulted for being used and manipulated as a tool, because he takes his butler's insults very well. Although it may be that he does not feel insulted because he knows that he is not the same and that this is not true.

Is it that I am the only one who feels that little incongruity

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GodlyShade

Status: c9

Jun 18, 2021

Wow so trash. Jk. Actually pretty interesting. Story is definitely cool. Lot of potential for stuff to happen. Characters definitely have some personality. I just gotta wait till more chapters come out so I can get into it. I’m a binge reader afterall.

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