Alright, this is my first review on the site so I also want to take someone first. (I'll continue sometime later as the story progressed)

So first, let me give my speech: Some of us come for Villainess & Otome game tag and the others come for the Yandere tag and there are others who come for different tags. But worry not brothers, we are into this hell hole together as we can't satisfy our thirst and hunger for our favourite genre. May God bless us with more novel that have our favourite genre, Amen.

Alright, that's it now let's start.

1. The story has an interesting premise, and I really love the tags. Especially the harem one. I really hope the author fulfils these tags and not just make it for a clickbait.
2. Chapter one maybe created with a thought 'How can I make this f**ker die'. I don't know if it's supposed to be a joke since the author can skip that part, but who am I to predict?, maybe there is a surprise? That's why the author made it?. Well, It's not bad and pretty funny.
3. For the characters, they are written descriptively, so that's a point from me. So far There're only 2 'possible' heroine introduced. One is a sadistic bitch (probably a yandere) and the other is a Tsundere. I really hope the author won't make these girls like how the generic harem novel is. I really hope there's a development in every character. Girls arent pokemon.
4. Also, I'm looking forward to how the Author going to make the 'capturable targets/the main Male character of the game' will act. 

Well overall, It's interesting and recommended adding it to your reading list.

For the cons, maybe It's the grammar. It's not that bad except if you're some grammar nazis that feels pain in your butt everytime you saw a grammar mistake.

That's it. I'll add it later, Thank you very much for reading my review.

I'm Out.

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