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Just so you know, I'm gonna be nitpicky and I'm just gonna talk about the part that takes place in 2045 (ch 1), the part was hard to read for a gun freak and ex French soldier like me. I am sorry but im gonna take off the gloves.
1
A messenger in 2045! Where is the radio! You have at least 1 long distance radio (15 km in transmission) in each "platoon". But it's just for the drama and maybe like Russia in WW2 they dont have the resours to give a radio to a "disposable platoon".
2
"Type 32" rifle, you could have used the "howa type 20" (the new JSDF main combat rifle). The army in general keeps its rifle for 20 to 30 years. Maybe they just change to the new 6.8 mm in 2032
3
14 year old soldier! What the f ###, no (rich) country would fight until it needed to use children (nowadays) and the reason is you don't really get more soldiers (only between 6% and 8% of your army will have between 12 and 18) this is the reason why, in times of war, children work in factories and not on the battlefield. But in WW2 we have some instances like the germany army (Hitler Youth, SS Youth Division) and the Japanese army (Tekketsu Kinnōtai).
4
7.62 x 39, Russian armed forces now use 5.45 x 39.
5
Sergeant at 16? It takes at least 3 years in the French army to become a sergeant and who will give control of 5 to 20 soldiers to a 16-year-old? But in some country like singapore you can become a Sergeant with about 10 months of training including BMT.
6
The army uses a defensive grenade, as the name suggests, you have to be behind a defense to use it, not a cover. And don't hold a grenade in your hand for 2 seconds, some grenades have a 2.5 second fuse but the JSDF use the american M26 and M67 grenades those grenade have a 5 seconde fuse.
PS it's a fun and easy story to read.
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amazing sh*t but it doesn’t fit my niche so while i’m gonna leave it might as well write the tiniest review on this site
action hero summoning romantic subplot done right
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It's awesome, author's pretty chill and the story is fun to read with explained stuff so u don't have to get too confused but also has a lot of symbolism.
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It’s action packed, dark, interesting, fun, and just overall a great read. I am super invested in the characters, the story, the world, and the character development.
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This is really enjoyably and I can't wait for more
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