i dont know if the author forgot somehow, or thought it was unimportant to move on with the tutorial at the start, where the goal was for the MC to become human. but for whatever reason they saw fit, the MC is still an animated corpse, and that would be fine, if not for the sheer volume of x rated chapters (not scenes, entire chapters) and for me, this story has reached the ultimate end as "unenjoyable".

the plot was actually really good. I technically would've given this a 3 or 4 otherwise. The backdrop worldbuilding and politics seem well thought out. there were some hiccups in the earlier chapters, such as the system's numbers or exp not adding up or whatever the hell went wrong with chapters 50 & 51 never being fixed. not huge issues though. but as of the last like 7 chapters where the MC has been "conquering" new girls, you are painfully reminded that every woman in this story is having s*x with a corpse.

when it was a chapter or two here and there spread out, it was tolerable. honestly I glazed over and skipped many of them. (some even go into great detail that the guy's skin is just hanging off, his genitals are rotted, etc) but yea. while im not going to go back and count, its been at least the last 5+ chapters of necro-porn and im no longer able to give a crap what the story is "supposed" to go from here on. far as im concerned, its already over

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DeluxeHipster

Status: chapter 101 : irijina wolls

Mar 8, 2021

This was very interesting for 10 chapters or so, then there was the goblin scene where it literally looks like it was taken from 'Goblin Slayer' there are poor references and the guy had s*x for 3 years, and the s*x scenes were... Unitresting to say the least. then there's places or people taken from other novels like Overlord and such. It was a promising novel, shame it dropped in quality after 10 chapters or so. The only thing that can save it is to delete all the chapters after 10 and re-do.

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Eugenio

Status: c26

Feb 13, 2021

It had a good start, but it went worsening with the meeting of the new girls. The s*x scenes, and there are a lot of them, are awfully descripted, and the way they "fell in love" with him doesn't make ANY sense, not even extremely sheltered girls would do that. But I have to say that the battles are quite good. Finally, since it has become too messy I'm dropping it.

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