What would happen to a guy that died out of rage while in a Guild War?
What would the choice of some bored dimensional being who catches his soul in the middle of his way to the afterlife?
What would happen when the guy's addiction mixes with the Wizarding World of Harry Potter!? What chaos would that bring to the world!?
Well, this was an idea I had like a week ago, and wanted to try it out on my journey to learn how to write. So, here it is. It's another fanfic, yes. Because it's easier to write.
Also, with this one, I'll probably post only during the weekends, not daily like with the Novel's Extra's Extra. Firstly because I want to finish the other one, and also because I need to research a lot more (I'm not that knowledgeable in Harry Potter.)
As usual, any feedback and criticism will be well received, and thanks for reading!
Will be posting this in Royal Road and Webnovel too.
This "story" is a train wreck. Grammar horrible, no consistency between chapters. There's a "System" in there, where the MC earns points for upgrades. Those points fluctuate wildly, at some point the MC has about 20k points, then there's a time skip of about two whole years (!), where it would've been safe to assume the MC earned points for improvements, but no change for the positive is visible. Then there's the intelligence of the MC. He's actually mentally disabled, as it's not possible for a healthy mind to be that stupid.
I'm only at chapter 13 but so far I'm quite enjoying this story.
It does well in capturing that wonder and joy in magic that the early HP stories had. I eventually stopped reading the canon books because the scales shifted from wonder and joy (with a hint of darkness and mystery) to angst, drama, and depression. Sadly most HP fan-fiction I've encountered also descends into darkness fairly quickly so the more optimistic tone of this one, along with setting it a couple of years before the canon story begins, feels like a breath of fresh air.