In a world where 99.9% of all men were wiped out and future births only had a 0.1% chance of being male, the role of men in society became that of celebrities graciously donating their seed to the masses. With the world population declining, pregnancy has become a social status, affording women government assistance, health insurance, and citizenship should they find a man to bless them with seed. With an only 1 in a 1000 chance of finding a guy, many women will do anything it takes to get close to a man and become pregnant. And should those women bear a male, it’s like winning the lottery, the remainder of their lives set as they receive massive stipends and no responsibility but to nurture their sons. Clyburn was reincarnated into such a world. Can a former unsuccessful business man properly navigate a female-centric world full of woman who just want to use him for his seed? With an overprotective mother, two caring sisters, and the memories of another world, he might just.
This story just isn't for me. That isn't to say that it's not good, though! Believe me, the characters are amazing. The discriptions are outstanding! However, the story contains a bit too much darkness in it for me to handle. Sure, I can handle a bit of darkness, but this isn't a "little" darkness. It's an astronomical amount of darkness! At least, in volume 2....
I am not a sadist and do not enjoy the MC getting hurt, nor do I like betrayals. The story has no betrayals that are "complete betrayals", but it is on the bordering line. Everytime I read a page, I felt this uneasy feeling in my heart. It was as if I knew something bad was gonna happen. I tried to put up with the feeling for as long as I could. I knew that if I let it take over, I was going to drop the series.
At volume 2, everything came pouring out. I have dropped the series, but I will never forget it. This is a work of art, but not one that I completely like. Believe me, it's much better than how I write my stories. I am going to sever my ties with this series and felt like I needed to write a review. I feel my heart painfully tightening knowing that I won't ever know how this story ends. An amazing work of art, this series was.
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Since the cuck author whatsawhizzer likes to live in his own little bubble and deleted almost everything what criticizes his trash fire, I will post here my review which he deleted on his own website.
Author really into traps now. I mean I get that the rumours about him are true of him shoving NTR in almost all of your stories. Thats his kink and trait, but it seems once he will come back and write on this again, he will also add traps/futa into his stories since this was his big brain idee of a prequal lol. Thank god I dropped Men of the House before it turned into a similar sh*t show.I enjoyed The Coitus Exchange, tho its f**king very short, and Netori Master, also here... just a single chapter. Hence I thought despite his bad reputation I would give this novel a chance since he seems to "enjoy" Harem stories too... according to your subscribestar at least but this is just him lying.
I wish I could have read the comments there before (his website), even tho he delete almsost ALL of them which criticize him... I wish I checked the comments on other sites like this which would saved my wasted time on another NTR infused crap. I dont mind bait. TBH if its ONLY bait for drama I dont mind but he simple cant help himself to make the baits into real NTR.
I mean for real, he had a BIG banger here of a start, THIS good... and then he f**ked THIS up alone with Volume 2... then he add MORE BS with magic, ONLY for more NTR... volume after volume... only to retcon the story TWICE because he wanted to appease some people in indonesia for their NTR fetish ? I get people want to get paid for their money, but if he want NTR, he should make a NTR focused story, which you seems to enjoy creating it. But dont mix it up as you did here. You saw how fast and bad it turned out. At least he admitted yhe f**ked it up, but now he tries to deny it. I thought people are harsh with him since he made some mistakes in the past, but it seems he simply cant write Harem stories at all, and if he reach a roadblock he add NTR because his brain cant handle simple human behaviour. For him there is only black or white, one extrem or the other, but no grey, no something in between... But the author is the one lecturing the people about wanting a "wish fulfillment" in a Harem story... Like for real, this guy is so whack.
And then there was this comment of his... THAT comment of his... it just showed me he dont know what the people who was reading it really wanted in the first place, or for the better wording, NOT to do in the first place. He knows people enjoyed only volume 1, and he tried to find a way to create something similar one. And you know what he wants to do ? He wants to create another trap-ish, futa-ish protag with a sh*tty personality which as you saw was on the same level bad and hated on as the cheap, crappy NTR baits he did, which of course turned into real NTR because whatsawhizzer is not whatsawhizzer without having his cuck content shoved it just because lol. But also it will play it in the same universe as this on ? Really ? Where people know what will happen once MC2 dies, MC1 gets reborn into this one and what we saw in this story will be cannon ?Im glad I waited before purchising the bonus chaps of Man of the House or Kindred Paradise.I hope he WILL work on this dumpster fire so people will understand what his real fetish are and treat him like that. I hope he will never make a rework or "zero" version of it since he dont deserve it. I hope like NTR crush, this will be also be equated on the famous whizzerthemegacuck in the smut LN community for decades.
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I really hate this story, MC who is really stupid and doesn't consider the consequences in the future.
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Author is shooting for his version of PLxIC and failing miserably. Incredibly inconsistent personalities, jarringly unfunny comedy, and a plot that gets swampy with no drain in sight.
s*x scenes are decent, but you will get tired quickly. Sorry but this one was just not for me.
Premise and beginning was interesting, yet it doesn’t seem to be worth continuing.
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This story has a pretty interesting premise but early on it really begins to become too drama filled. It feels like one of those soaps that you'd watch on cable with a twist every episode to up the drama. That's what has begun to happen.
Also, the MC of this story must legitimate have some sort of mental disorder that is causing him to act so f**king stupid that you probably can't believe it. Throughout the story, you see him try to think like the supposed 35 year old he should be yet he constantly acts without thinking of the consequences, makes horrible choices, and makes the excuse of "it's my hormones. It's my teenage body." Hormones don't work like that you f**k. They don't regress your mind to a mentally deficient 5 year old. I swear it's like this 35 year old who had a wife and slept with prostitutes has just discovered what a penis is and how to use it. The last straw was when his sister decided to move out cus of all this sh*t (even the characters are done dealing with his sh*t) and he says that he'll get her back by showing how good a man he is all confidently. After a year of doing nothing to improve himself, not thinking of consequences to what he does, attempting to solve everything by putting his d*ck in the nearest hole, and blaming everything on his mom for coddling him and his hormone for controlling him instead of his own stupid choices. Yep. Definitely better than anyone else and a great future for her to be with him.
I had to drop at this point because with all the resources he can have, he does nothing to improve himself despite being raped multiple times. He constantly makes horrible decisions with his d*ck and then blames it on his "hormones". When something serious is going on, instead of figuring it out, he whips his d*ck out.
The story started out good but honestly the tone is all over the place with serious moments, smut, and some comedic events happening in quick succession and out of place. This added with the horrible MC make for a story that started good, but ended up a clusterf**k.
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sh*tty MC, only thinks with his d*ck
Dark stuff which isn't my cup of tea
I just liked the few 1st chaps with his mother, I only stafted bcz of d incest tag, but it was honestly a waste of my time
If the author writes something light, nice n fluffy (with incest oc n not sh*tty n horny MC) I would certainly read it
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1/5 for enjoyment
3/5 for smut
MC is 0iq dumb as sh*t and there's no reason at all for this to be an isekai. He's supposed to be a 35 year old in a 12 year old body but has the brain power of a 10 year old.
If you enjoy stereotypical American melodramatic romance TV shows, you'll eat this series up.
It's a frustrating read, and you'll leave more s*xually frustrated than gratified.
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This was an interesting harem story. Volume one of the novel was pretty good, but volume 2 is a different story. Most of the volume was pretty entertaining until I got near the end. I feel like near the end of the volume the tone just dramatically changed compared to the tones in volume 1 and in the beginning of volume 2.
2 Important Character just die which didnt really fit with the tone the volume began with. Also it felt like their deaths were just brushed off despite being a really important event in the story. Idk could just be me being a bitch lol.
In conclusion this harem story is dark and I enjoyed the beginning.
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If you came looking for a comedic harem as a harem seeking reincarnator traverses a world where women outnumber men 1000 to 1 or a story of absolute smut, leave, the first 10 or so chapters gave me a wrong opinion on this novel and my expectations were overturned gloriously. The story does not pull punches and shows just how bad a such a world can become.
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If you can get past how utterly repulsive the main character is, it's a great story. It's just a really high hurdle and subverts expectations.
This is not Mushoku Tensei. He is not Rudeus. He will begin out disgusting, and only get worse. He will start out as a horny recluse with questionable morals and slowly evolve into a habitual abuser. His actions only become worse as he does the exact opposite of his claims, almost never acknowledging his own actions.
The smut scenes are quite good and the world is interesting and fairly fleshed out. While I'd never want to live there, it's interesting to think about how such a messed up society could exist and did draw me in for far longer than I would have thought. The magic system is a bit odd, but seems pretty engaging in how it was implimented. The drama is paced at a fairly good speed though sometimes it is jarring.
I'd recommend this to anyone who can ignore/pardon the MC for his increasingly disgusting behavior.
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