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The Mortal Acts
The Mortal Acts
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The Mortal Acts is an epic progression fantasy with a lower focus on training aspects and a great focus on discovering new ways of using powers intelligently. I've always been drawn to stories where characters use their powers creatively to overcome opponents and obstacles, and I think all the possibilities can provide a great playground for twists and turns.

It's inspired by a variety of media, including Will Wight's Cradle, Hunter x Hunter, and Bioshock, so if you like the creative power use elements from those, come check it out.

This is my first serial, so please feel free to leave comments and feedback, and join the discord server: https://discord.gg/ZFve53jnJU.

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Blurb:

Riven Morell cuts short his regular life at school and home when his mother falls terminally ill. Desperate to find a cure, he travels to Severance Frontier, a desolate land haunted by hordes of ghosts, witches, and demons collectively called the Deathless.

But a miraculous cure doesn’t magically fall into his hands.

Things are worse in Severance Frontier than Riven had assumed. Ghosts are banding together into armies, demons are kidnapping anyone who strays out of settlements, and witches are enslaving everyone left and right.

Riven, of course, gets embroiled in the mess. Missions to curb the Deathless activity are one thing, but when it starts to look like this is just the beginning of a war that extends beyond the mortal realm, Riven has a hard time focusing on why he came to Severance Frontier in the first place. His mother is inching towards death with every passing day, but if he doesn’t face down the Deathless, what little civilization the Frontier holds will be overrun and destroyed.

Thankfully, it looked like the Deathless might just hold the secret of the elusive cure.

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Adventurers Clever Protagonist Demons Fantasy World Firearms Ghosts Magic Male Protagonist Politics Saving the World Secretive Protagonist Shield User Slow Growth at Start Special Abilities Strategic Battles Strategist Terminal Illness Weak to Strong Witches
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    TLDR: Story good, MC quick thinker, pacing bad.

    The story is great and all of the characters so far feel alive. The main character is never saved by the cliche breakthrough in the middle of combat when fighting opponents stronger than him, there are no sudden breakthroughs in the middle of combat to save his ass, so every strong opponent he beats is done by using quick thinking and teamwork. The problem I have with this story is the pacing. All of the world's problems seem to be kicking off one after another and our MC Is forced to participate in them because of family. There are no adequate examples without spoiling the story but it's like that meme where the dog is sitting at a table going "everything is fine" while the house is on fire. You ever read a story where you just have to stop and go read something else to relax a bit? This is just like that because the main character rarely comes out of a fight unscathed, hell, most engagements feel like losses even though he won and these pile up and wear on the mind.

    In conclusion, the story is good but the pacing and the constant pyrrhic victories wear you down. These problems could be solved if author allowed the MC to just take a breather and catch his breath maybe even train a bit but the author wants the main character to learn by the sword and not the pen.

    This was my first review so I hope it helped anybody decide if they wanted to read the story or not.

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