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I started to read it because of:
Content Warning: s*xual Content
Genre: Ecchi, Fantasy, Harem, Mature, Romance, Smut
Tags: Caring Protagonist, Doting Love Interests, Incest, Kind Love Interests, Older Love Interests, R-18, Romantic Subplot, s*xual Cultivation Technique, Sister Complex, Strong Love Interests
- I was hoping for fluffy and intimate interaction between the protagonist and the female leads...
But got an indecisive and cowardly protagonist when it comes to relationships... and making it unnecessarily complicated... when it could be resolved with just talking...
And him choosing to confide with the Scarlet Flame Mercenary Group (With the group that author skipped their interaction AGAIN!) about his problem with his relationship... made me even more disappointed! DISAPPOINTED! Sigh... it's my bad for having some expectation from such a protagonist...
- Overly focused on Martial Arts and Cultivation? BUT with hardly anything explained about the Martial Arts realms and Cultivation stages... In the chapter, it said: "Yueshi and Yuan Yue were also at the fourth stage" I guess it's the Cultivation stage, but... do it have a name or something, so far I only remember it was mentioned only the Body Strengthening Stage in the beginning and that's it...
- The fights are too long and hardly make you immersed... I had to stop reading like 6-7 times on the Beast Horde arc, just to wonder if I should just skip or what to do...
- His interaction with other characters is way too lacking compare to the focus on the fights... the interaction is mainly skipped... And I am here for the interaction of the protagonist and the female leads...
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It's good. Just read it. The only nitpick's I have is that the spelling and grammar could be better at times. Sometimes the word choice is off. Other than that? One of the better stories on the website for adults. Could use more smut though and slightly faster pacing.
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It's f**king good! The smut is good, the story seems interesting, and the writing quality is fine.
This is a damn gem.
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Of the many assorted novels on this site, Why read this?
Should be a pretty standard harem type cultivation novel right?
Besides the smut not suckingSome key points:"Danger at Every Step" had me with some good anticipation of what will happen next, especially at the cliff 'drop'. "The Spread of Their Wings" Well, Its like that moment when your faction just stomps an enemy after a grueling defeat. So yeah.
About "Dragon Amongst Men" (I.E. First arc) :
It is a little too convenient/stupid of his sister to walk through the Red Light District and almost get molested by some young master which gets our MC beat up. She could and should have avoided that problem. PLUS the aphrodisiac that is mostly there to have him bone his sister and start the dual cultivation plot to get them both in a sect. Which is fine but feels a little forced.
Some problems:
Aside from the listed above, give it a shot, as I had originally brushed this novel off, before realizing it's potenial. It might not be to your taste, and that is perfectly ok.
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Really good work. It's a well-written, thought-out story. Any pacing issues are probably because we are getting the story in pieces rather than all at once.
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