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Word Count: | 121,703 |
Average Words: | 1,690 |
Pages: | 443 |
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the story is I interesting and intriguing, however, I had to drop it by chapter 7 because both the sentence structure and the grammar are very bad. I advice a complete rewrite, not just to fix the many grammatical mistakes but to build the story back from the ground up with a readable structure because as it is now, it looks like the work of someone that just started learning english for a few days.
I give it a 2/5 that can become a solid 4/5 if it got a good rewrite.
(Sorry if my review sounds offensive, disheartening and/ or belittling)
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