I loved the MC skill set and how he deals with the world and the cards he has been dealt with I just hope to see some more elemental Jutsu and maybe some Nintaijutsu too.

PS: Would really love to see the MC using some sort of Kekkei Genkai he acquired.

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ixu09

Status: c116

May 16, 2021

Ch. 64: Really good so far, loving it!!

Ch. 116: Now I'm hooked, waiting for more chapters daily, keep going it's a good fic!

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NexusPrimodius

Status: c247

Apr 2, 2023

One of the best Naruto fanfics there are on any platform, the characters feel very real and have great character and not npc, the plot twist are great and u will not be able to guess them. Overall for me, it is even better than OG Naruto

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daroot1998

Status: 139. phase three

May 23, 2022

I have been lurking on here for quite a while and I have to say this is one of the best anime isekais I have read. It manages to have an overpowered character without it feeling out of place or like a self insert. It doesn't rely on fan favorite characters to retain interest in its plot, meaning that it doesnt only rely on the novelty of seeing an oc interact with the main cast and story, but it manages to retain interest through its own original plot. The writing is tight and every power up for our oc is satisfyingly achieved in clever ways. So yeah its a great read, I genuinely love this fic.

Some (one) criticisms

Every character will often times speak in pronouns when discussing plot points, example: "I dont know, but that one is a mystery" "oh you mean that one?". (Not an excerpt but a good example) Its supposed to establish mystery or intrigue but it's just not how people talk. Like the dialogue most of the time is pretty good, it's funny and campy (in a clever way) when it wants to be. But pronoun games are campy but not clever, you can resolve mysteries while adding new ones in dialogue, this just adds mystery inorganicly and is just annoying, because the story itself pounds. The writing is just not as satisfying as it can be IMO

At the same time I've never written anything besides some sh*t for college so what do I know. Hope I don't come of as a pretentious jerk. This stuff slaps in the end so the author knows more then I do. :)

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Zekriya

Status: 175

Mar 9, 2022

EDIT: I take half of what I said back, the novel for the past 10 chapters, from when I posted this review to as of this edit (175) has been doing everything I wanted from it

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mainly focusing on REI and his team and little to no focus on company which I'm so happy about, this is easily one best written Naruto fanfic's ever but I'm only bumping up my score to a 4 because it took so long for this to happen, I honestly think the pacing could be better, maybe sped up a lil bit.

Old review:

I like this novel, not as much as I used to though, used to be a top Naruto fanfic for me personally but it started going downhill at some point, I don't know if it's just me (keep in mind this is a personal opinion) but I have 0 interest in the Company, and they seem to be the main highlight of the story, the focus on them keeps on growing with every chapter. When I started reading the novel I was very hyped about REI adventures and his progression but the focus seems to be shifting slowly toward Company that I honestly have no interest in at all and side characters that aren't really impacting the story as they are made out to be. I started the novel with REI, stayed for Rei, and now I'm most likely dropping cause there's barely any REI and when there is, the pacing is mad slow, I don't even know what bro is doing at some points... 2 things kept me reading this far. First, hoping that the Company will be done with which doesn't seem to be the case at all any time soon... Second, those cliffhanger lines at the end of each chapter that honestly keep losing their spark. There was also a 3rd reason but I gave up on it, which is as I mentioned Rei's progression/focus but 90% to 100% of each chapter is made up of company/side characters POV and when that 10% REI happens nothing really happens. I give it a decent rating because of what the novel meant to me at some point but now, it's barely a 3/5.

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Wotdaduk

Status: c149

Jan 31, 2022

The plot, characters and grammar is good but one thing that made me rate it 4☆ instead of 5☆ is the constant change in POV.I have read alot of isekai and reincarnation novels and im used to changes in POV but this novel changes POV every 1-3 chapter or even halfway through 1 chapter which is a bit too much for me imo since it is hard to keep track of what is going on.

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Kimginmu

Status: c248

Jun 17, 2023

Progressive development with care to characters and world building and perfect pacing. Solid plot and great fighting sequence. Author doesnt shy away for improvement as the writing develops from initial chapters.

Main point that I love is the pacing of each and between arcs. The worldbuilding and story also looks solid and enthusiasm of author could be seen. To simplify common knowledge and heavy topics into conversation is hard enough and reading it brings joy. Story gave great suspense and twist enough to keep you hooked.

I came for the nice premise and stayed for the story and characters because it is so interesting. The characters overall have personality and doesnt feel too much used as plot item (though it is shonen type so most trope and trait kind of predictable). I love the expand writing of MC and his team. The relationship built doesnt seem forced and flowed quite naturally.

Positive point aside, to reach the fullfilment of great writing and story, reader must endure initial writing (beginning chapters) as author just kickstarted presenting the story.

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FirCrocodile

Status: c241/ re-reading

Feb 28, 2023

This is by far the best Naruto fanfic I've read. Everyone is entitled to their opinion but I don't get that some people in the ratings dis on this story so hard. So far this story is good and I will continue to read it.

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KnutKnut

Status: 240. kickoff [1]

Oct 7, 2022

I like it I was a bit of fresh air to see he was in the Kumogakure rather than Konoha it was a nice and it aways kept wanting more I woud recommend this to anyone its nice

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Anthos

Status: c72

Aug 7, 2022

This is one of the best fanfics I read.

Love how realistic it gets, you can see author actually putting effort in writing story and building world instead of just op fanfic where MC blitzes through every problem with brute strength.

Only thing I dislike is lifelines and system voice. Those just don't sit well with me.

anything else is done right. Interactions are fun, characters are actualy interesting, development is not rushed.

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