Best Naruto fanfic out there! An actual story that doesn't turn into erotica with OP powers. You can actually relate and care about the MC and the cast. Great worldbuilding and pacing. Worth a read, you'll enjoy it!

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mja

Status: c22

Nov 25, 2021

man this novel is annoying the character interactions are absolute trash none of the characters have any distinction between each other than the fact the author putting their name in () but atleast it isn't as trash as most other naruto fan fics

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Darkcricket

Status: 95. daily activity

Jul 10, 2021

Absolutely top-tier Naruto fanfiction and an amazing MC

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Nasumi

Status: c252. Hanetsuki?

Dec 4, 2023

Awesome story! The best Naruto fanfic I've ever read! Take your time Proper-san. Just like your name, rest properly whenever you needed to. You're human after all, and every human have the right to take a break and for them to rest until full recovery. We will wait for your return! In the meantime, I'll reread this piece of gold whenever I missed this story... ˃̵͈̑ᴗ˂̵͈̑. (*´ ˘ `*)

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viclight

Status: c252

Nov 7, 2023

I spent the entire week reading this story and it was totally worth it. The world building was amazing you could tell that the author put a lot of thought and care into the process. The author made me care for a whole ass village that I was previously completely indifferent to. And reading Rei the MC go from viewing the people around him as simulations to people he actually cares about and wants to protect was so satisfying to read. If Rei stayed spiritually stagnant I would not have liked him as much as I do now. This story also uses the Otsutsuki clan as an overarching plot point but while I think the introduction of this clan was poorly executed in Naruto, I think the author does an amazing job integrating those aliens into their story

Overall a 10/10 story.

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M3vm3

Status: 117. overture [1]

Nov 17, 2022

Truly one of the most satisfying reads ever. The pacing, writing, character deve and uniqueness of this fanfic is well done. Thank you MrProper

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00xeln

Status: 252. hanetsuki?

Oct 4, 2023

The only thing wrong with this story is that it's not ranked higher. Best Naruto FF that isn't a smorgasbord of insanity (I'm looking at you, Yuna!) Well written, exceptionally well played out plot and phenomenal climaxes. MC is strong, but realistically placed within the material. AKA, hes not killing Kages after a week. Or 200+ chapters either, but it has a great flow to it that keeps you coming back.

Pretty sure it's the lack of smut that has it below the others.

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darillis

Status: 211. earnest

Apr 5, 2023

I loved this story, the rhythm is great, the characters are captivating, and the plot is fantastic. But I don't know what happened that suddenly the MC became weak and stupid after the chunin exam arc arrived and I couldn't bear to read more so as not to end the wonderful story that it is. So I'm going to wait for this sh*t that turned into the exam and after I'm done with this sh*tty phase I'll go back to reading and hope that the author returns to his rhythm. That's it thanks for the great story as I said until the chunin exam arc

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Eryck068

Status: c214

Sep 4, 2022

A história é muito boa, só peca na força do MC, ele é fraco demais para qm tem um super corpo e uma mente avançada. Os personagens secundários estão Op demais tbm.

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