What I really wanted to give this story was 4.5 stars, it has it's problems, but overall it's a good time loop+super hero (of the Worm-like persuasion) story, until the last loop that is: to put it simply the ending is unsatisfying and feels rushed (like a story that was axed at the start of the final arc), if you want more details:

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this novel is possibly one of the best I have read, the idea is a little cliche but the execution is really good, the MC has a perfect personality for this kind of thing, the way the history is told feels natural, and each  chapter always leaves  me with a 'i want to know what happens next' kinda of feeling.

it's just a shame that this novel doesn't have more views

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I'm not the best at reviews but I'll give my honest opinion If you're thinking about giving this a read, then I'd say you should do soThe author does an amazing job in my opinion of setting up an interesting world and setting up the mystery the main character has to solve.I found myself constantly wanting to read more and enjoying each new character introduced. Thanks to the author for making such a good story to read.

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It's f**king amazing really, but the ending felt rushed and left me bare minimum closure, it feels like emotional whiplash after binging it all- This review was made right after finishing and I'm salty, so maybe I'll feel better after a few hours, or starting to read something else. 

All in all, this author is so damn skilled and dedicated goddamn, keep movin forward my guy! I'd have paid for this sh*t.

Edit: f**k y'all, I'm making a fan rewrite! Can't leave it at this.

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Possibly the best novel on this website.

MC is a normal guy in a modern day setting, who gains the ability to time travel to the past everytime he dies. Ofcourse later we find out the nuances of his powers but that is the gist of it.

We follow the MC in his path to solve tragedies using his powers - standard time travel stuff. MC quickly realises it ain't that easy. Infact, it feels like it's near impossible at the moment. But the author smartly always leaves a door open so we have room for hope for the characters, which also keeps us on the edge of our seats.

MC is a relatable man, above average intelligence but prone to mistakes nevertheless, who wants to save as many as he can, initially to save his home and his friends, but his goals change constantly, the more he learns how cruel the world is and who his enemies really are. Through this we see some of the best character progression ever. 

Author introduces a wide array of characters, each with a unique personality and thier own goals and MC's journey to figure out what those goals are either by conversation, using his power to find humor in all this tragedy, or through his powers through trial and error keep us enganged and rooting for them.

Author has incredible skill in dropping the most unforseen plot twists and I for one believed I had seen 'em all, till now. My mind should not be blown this often, it's not good for my health. 

There are still some cliches, but it's a superhero novel, it's impossible to avoid them altogether.

It all feels incredibly real and I've never been this invested in a character like this before. 

I've teared up almost once every chapter, usually from feeling helpless for the MC or from the intense badassery by the MC.

Thank you author for letting us read it.

Also Author, I know this is incredibly inappropriate to suggest but pls, for the love of chocolate eclairs and puppies, pls give the MC a happy ending.

This is my favorite ongoing web novel at the moment, and definitely in my top 5 web novels of all time.

Definitely re-reading this after it's completion.

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Dropped at chapter 27

Although the writing is very good, and I like the comedic undertone, this story gets worse the longer you read.

The MC knows that all his actions have ZERO consequences, and even then 50% of every chapter is him whining about stuff that he did or how "everyone dies". He is very stupid and I cant force myself to read this any longer.

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Imagine Fate series and every girl in the series  (rin, saber, sakura, saber, rider, rin classmate1, rin classmate2, etc) has their own series/route BUT it stop airing after episode5.

Its INTERESTING but after so many loops became LESS and LESS until you won't care anymore and just want to ship for every girl, but then you realize 0 plot development and 0 character development except MC who stuck in his hero-syndrome.

And the worst part is he (author) decide to cockblock you.

0 plot development, 0 chara development, no fanservice, its only bearable coz his writing.

sum : Fate series FINISHED the story (end of 4th holy grail) in every route (rin, saber, sakura). In this case author know where he want to go but he don't know how. 

Even Re:zero, subaru with 0 superpower manage to finished his own story.

You think this deserve more viewer? No, ppl stop reading its boring coz the story repetitive a-b-c-d with slight modification and its only manage to stay at D

A. Wake up with superpower and choose violence

B. Fighting villains/ess

C. Bonding time with girl (s) and dont get your expectation high coz author gonna cockblock you

D. Died after Hiroshima ver.2 goes boom

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