STUBBED - THIS STORY IS COMPLETE AND HAS MOVED TO AMAZON!
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09H9F6RBW
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[I was reborn too weak to be an adventurer, so I opened an item shop by the dungeon instead!]
Reborn into a fantastical RPG-system based world, Fresh is offered a second chance at life. Initially glad to have escaped her old life, she quickly realizes that this new one might not be much better. Her new body is too frail to follow any grand dreams of adventure, her new mind is too dulled to allow any meticulous planning and this new, seemingly colorful, kind world is anything but.
Needing a way to survive in this horrible place, Fresh bands together with some unusual people and they take on an entirely new challenge; running an item shop just outside of the dungeon!
(Updates daily!) (LitRPG) (Slow start)
[Winner in the Royal Road Writathon challenge winter 2021!]
[Winner in the Royal Road Writathon challenge summer 2021!]
[Also available on Amazon! - https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09H9F6RBW]
I like novels with crafting. And this novel have a nice crafting. Author, more crafting plz !!!
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I absolutely love your works, the characters are soo good that they seem real and the MC is soo Colourfull... The way to make the story is soo awesome that I could read a 10000 chapters story in a day, becouse I could not stop myself from reading a chapter after the other, not even for blinking and save my eyes from dreaded dryness.
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I'm no expert, but I can say that without a doubt that this is an enjoyable read! Perhaps the MC is a bit dumb, and sure she makes incredibly stupid mistakes sometimes (well, practically all the time for the first chapters...) I can't say that I won't make similar mistakes when I'm put in her position. Plus, she's cute, a genuinely nice person, and she's trying! Which is more than I can say about me...
Anyway! The author clearly puts a lot of effort into making the story and math required to be consistent, not to mention researching mythology, folklore and the like, whether or not it's actually for the story or not, I can't tell, but you can rest assured they know what they're doing.
There's only around 50 chapters at the moment I'm writing this, so I can't say much about the characters besides the protagonists, but they're likeable enough... Especially considering I can count those who have an actual name with a single hand...
Long story short, give the book a try!
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So far so good!
MC can be infuriating, but it's still a good read to me at least.
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An excellent story. It reads like a cross between one of those anime about moe girls doing cute/fun things with friends, a typical isekai (but one of the crunchy more grounded ones that are supposed to be set in a proper fantasy parallel world rather than someone's fantasy-themed wish fulfilment backdrop), and a fairy tale, but like an old school grim, grimm, fairy tale where its less about lessons being taught and happily ever afters and its more about weird whimsical/magical/messed up stuff happening to people. The story is well written. The characters, like them or hate them, are largely well realized (at least to a level appropriate for the plot).
This was one of those stories that I didn't particularly enjoy but read anyway because it was of a high enough standard, was well put together, and despite any complaints I might have had about the story, the plot was interesting enough to keep my attenton.
That being said this story is very much its own thing, and while it uses familiar instruments and plays familiar notes, the song it plays is quite original. There was something very dreamlike about this story and maybe there were times where things were few notes too dreary at times. Also while I eventually got the gist that the MC was being impaired in a certain way, it was sometimes hard to tell when her poor judgement was based on that impairment and when it was just her being "her". Like all stories the experience will be very YMMV.
The story is slow paced but you still get a feeling of progress from the small achievements. The story is never all rainbows and puppy dogs but at the point I stopped reading the author still kept up an atmosphere of whimsy and wonder that kept the fun alive, and mercifully only used the threat of bad things happening to keep the tension alive, rather than driving this story right into the dismal lake of misery porn.
Overall this is a terrific book, for what it is. It wasn't exactly to my tastes but that's lofe. People have different tastes. Far be it for me to show up to cake shop a complaining about how terrible the steak is. I wholeheartedly recommend this story.
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I never write reviews so this isn't going to be one super detailed in why I love this novel, but I just love the characters. It's nice to see the struggles Fresh goes through and her development and how she remains so positive, I don't think I could do that in her position. Also Jubilee is harsh but I would like to think that Fresh is exactly what they/them needed in their life and is slowly being swayed by Fresh's sunny personality. Sorry if this review doesn't actually help but I just wanted to say you are doing an amazing job.
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You know that feeling, when you read a story and you can feel the characters. You've seen them somewhere or you know them, maybe they're even you in a way.
As long as you can appreciate character growth, true character growth, the kind that creeps inside before you fully notice it, you'll like this story.
As long as you are willing to read into it, reading around in all the nooks and crannies, there is much for you to read.
And, even if I hated the story, I feel confident I could still say it is good at what it does.
From Mr. Mushrooms to chicken butts and the bad thing, this story is full of life, in the same way it's full of death.
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The story so far is interesting. It has many different information Easter Eggs, which fit nicely to the story told.
The MC is... Well not as dumb as a bulb but their IQ lvl hasn't as big of a difference as there's supposed to be. However, she is very likable and her interactions with other characters are certainly very enjoyable. Also she has to much luck for her own good.
I recommend it to everyone who likes a good comedy, and a bit of mystery. If my Review convinced you, then welcome aboard! 😁
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