STUBBED - THIS STORY IS COMPLETE AND HAS MOVED TO AMAZON!
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09H9F6RBW
___________________________________
[I was reborn too weak to be an adventurer, so I opened an item shop by the dungeon instead!]
Reborn into a fantastical RPG-system based world, Fresh is offered a second chance at life. Initially glad to have escaped her old life, she quickly realizes that this new one might not be much better. Her new body is too frail to follow any grand dreams of adventure, her new mind is too dulled to allow any meticulous planning and this new, seemingly colorful, kind world is anything but.
Needing a way to survive in this horrible place, Fresh bands together with some unusual people and they take on an entirely new challenge; running an item shop just outside of the dungeon!
(Updates daily!) (LitRPG) (Slow start)
[Winner in the Royal Road Writathon challenge winter 2021!]
[Winner in the Royal Road Writathon challenge summer 2021!]
[Also available on Amazon! - https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09H9F6RBW]
MC is just dumb, ridiculously dumb, even someone tell her for her betterment she won't understand or maybe she does but she can't control herself, she does so many things that can get her killed and the only reason she is alive is because of plot Armor.
MC is kind, this is the only thing that is positive about her.
If you can't handle dumb MC, I recommend you to skip this one, though this is my personal opinion and maybe biased so you can check out yourself.
I wanted to give less stars but writing story is hard, they have to be creative and persistence to keep on writing, so extra marks for hardwork.
Read More
It might be a good story. It might be an interesting story.
But it is not a happy one, and the author takes great joy in rubbing that in.
Do not read.
There is only sorrow.
Read More
First of all, I'm reading Dungeon Item Shop since its twentyish chapter and it has been a fantastic ride. What made me trying to read this novel was the concept of the shop. I always loved fantasy stories with the idea of creating items and selling them. However, that's not why I kept reading it. I kept reading because of every single detail the author put in this novel.
The narrative is built REALLY slow, but I don't think that's a problem at all. It's slow to gradually construct the characters and the plot, making the reader feel engaged with everything. Razmatazz truly knows how to make funny scenes, tense scenes, wholesome scenes, and emotional scenes. Worldbuilding is built step by step and it keeps teasing us with information, just waiting to be seen.
About the characters. I think that must be the main reason why people drop Dungeon Item Shop or keep reading it. Fresh, the MC, is in a nice way pretty innocent, or simply put, she is dumb. I've seen people hating the way Fresh is, that they can't stand how dumb she is, but I think that only makes it better. MC is a flawed character that has enormous potential for growth, because of her innocence and lack of intelligence. Seeing her grow makes my heart warm, and seeing her making stupid decisions makes me anxiously getting closer to the monitor. Now about the Side-Character, they just make everything better, by complementing Fresh and being complemented by her. The dynamic of them always makes me smile.
The author keeps updating every single day, and I can't remember one time when there wasn't a chapter, making the most consistent author I've seen on this site. Overall, It's solid work that isn't for everybody. You must want to see character growth and not just see an op character face slaping everyone
Read More
If you can't stand brain dead MC's don't read. I mean that literally.
MC lives in a world where INT isn't just an abstract number towards their magical ability, no INT is actually intelligence.
She has none. Combine that with the most assholish of a secondary character you can imagine, that calls her every name possible, but she takes it because "TeeHee"
No. Just No.
Read More
The MC is like a child prodigy, talented but lacking in experience. Although her child-like mindset always leads to unexpected results, I find it a wonderfully unique aspect of this novel. Author is quite talented and well-learned, to say the least.
Read More
Ok, I can not say enough good about this story Yes the MC is cursed and it makes her stupid!
But give it time and keep in mind there a reason she does stupid crap. The curse Gives her a starting intelligence of 3 and she basically got the mind of a ret*rded child but give it time. Her Real mind seems to shine through and I am hoping that her mind will get healed in time. You will Love it! This story's Original twists!
Wish I could give it 6 stars instead of five! !
Read More
You know if you told me a year ago that I would be staying up until 3 am to read the new chapter in this book I probably would believe you because I have terrible sleeping habits
(also I dont write reviews so sorry if disorganized)
The Characters
Fresh: The MC. Shes.... kinda dumb, she knows her patron is evil but as her low stats reflect early on shes not observant or thoughtful for the consequences of most of her actions
although some of them are because the black fountain is controlling her
I like the style of System the world has and how Razz designates a profits page. So you can almost feel and visualize their successAnyways the story is really good but Razz will betray you around every corner and will laugh as you cry. NEVER TRUST RAZZ
Read More
A thoroughly enjoyable slice of life light novel. Masterfully blending world mythology & philosophical exposition with rich world building and LitRPG crafting and stats. An easy accessible but wonderfully layered story. Please keep up the great work!
Read More
I went into this not expecting to like it.. And then I loved it. A couple of slow points but it can't be an adventure every day. Shamrock is the best. If you don't know what that means you haven't read far enough. All in all a captivating and well crafted story. 👍
Read More
Edit: Coming back to this review at 266. The protagonist is mostly cured of their foolishness! Story improves even further from my previous review point.
Read More