For me this read somewhat like a crossover between old-school erotica with sketches, and a script for a comic. The sketch idea is cute, it's small sketches/drawings to visualize the story. I haven't seen much of that style outside fanzines from the 90's. At some point the drawings went from depicting what the reader "sees" to illustrating who says what in a chat-style manner. It's nice to see the Author's take on this... so: one point for doing something not everyone does, and subtract one for inconsistency.

What I really liked about the story, was the light playful tone, the feeling of characters goofing off and exploring their world. Shure it's smut, but that's not all of the story. Progressivly through the chapters that part fades out tho: it went from goofing around to hentai cliches sourrounding rape, incest, and tentacles. I don't mind the topics, nor the genres, but it's just an endless stream of cliches - without playing those well. Perhaps it's just another story stereotype the author is playing around with, or perhaps not. Time will tell.

Language or grammar wise the story is ok. I'm not quite sold of reading something like a comic script, that style might be fast paced, but it leaves out anything like the effects of a detailed description or suspence.

Parts of this story is not on ScribbleHub. The Author describes it as bonus content. For me that's a dealbreaker. I'm here to read the story, not to get links to another site.

So, to summarize: The first 20 chapters or so - 4, 5 stars, brilliant ideas, overall a lot of fun ideas and concept. Past chapter 29'sih - 3, 5 stars. Too heavy on cliches, and it just stopped being good.

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This is such a hilarious book, the drawings that the author make are fantastic and makes it easier to follow along as well as the plot is amazing and the comedy just makes this story perfect.

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I think it's the very first homm3 fic I've read:)

I really enjoyed it and I hope you'll continue it.

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It's pretty good, the author uses images to compensate for scenes and text to compensate his illustrations. This way  the reader gets the best of both.

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I love the humour and the incredible illustrations. The scenes are great too! Will see how it progresses from here!

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For the first 3 chapters (4 if the prologue is imcluded) was absolute trash AND I LOVE IT it was so clichéd it was good imo I have seen my fair share of smut content but this is maybe one of my top 50s just because it embraces how it's so trash, but the art is about b-tier which is just good, not great, just good

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This is a really good story I love where it's going and cant wait to see the next ep.

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One of the funniest and best written smuts I've read in (sadly) a long time. 

It has drawings (the kind that makes you more immersed in the story and not the kind that throws you off) so that's a plus.

The universe it's based on is one of my favorites as well so that's another plus.

Grammar is 10/10 I haven't noticed any issues. Plus.

Smut scenes (only one so far) are... "very well written", if you know what I mean *wink wink*. A big plus.

I think that's 3+2 plus? Guess that's a 5 stars!

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Overall, it's really good! The comedy is good, as well as the nsfw. The sketches are a very nice addition. While sometimes they do look a little strange, it's still better than nothing. Plus I have a hard time visualizing things, so having a sketch to go off for characters locations etc. Is very helpful. Overall it's been a great read so far. If I don't change my review, then note that this still stands for the rest of the novel.

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Nice lighthearted fun so far. Good smut and decent writing. Looking forward to where the story takes us.

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