Gabrielle wakes up to the beautiful world of Elega, the world of dreams, after someone put markings on her finger. She must juggle fighting the forces of darkness with being a nurse at her new job. She eventually meets up with an old friend she hadn’t seen for ten years. Unfortunately, on top of him not being human anymore, he is supposed to be her enemy, as he is a Darkling. Darklings the opposing force in the new dream world she goes to when she is asleep, but why is he helping her?
This is book 2 of the Zoriyan Legacy series, the first book is Angels of Acid.
—- AUTHOR’S NOTE—-
The first 10 or so chapters are made in one week each, so they may be a bit hard to read, it gets better later on. This was written with almost no previous writing skill, so bear with me.
I only read the first few chapters. My biggest problem is, the heroine just accepts everything that is thrown her way. Waking up in a fantasy world, okay, no questions asked, this happens to everyone all the time, right? Barely there but send on a dangerous mission without having a clue about how to use magic or whatever? No problem, she just goes (to get saved by her love interest, which was obvious otherwise the novel would have ended before it really started).
Also at first it sounds like her nurse life at day is in the future real world however as it turns out there was an incident and there is magic and monsters in the real world as well.
The story itself isn't the worst but the writing is just not very good.
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