In world were fluff is power it would be this one my god it such cute story to read it funny/cute/fluffy. It good read to kill some time. I say give it chance

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Lots of fluff. Author is clearly huge fan of Madoka with how some things go on. Character are mostly enjoyable. Story have some mysteries to it. Overall one of those stories were you sit and enjoy without much thinking.

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Grammar: At first, the author makes a lot of grammar mistakes. But as the chapter goes on, the author gradually improves and makes fewer mistakes.

Plot: The story doesn't follow any other GB template. The drama in the novel is not too heavy and bearable. Some Arc is planned really well, especially the most recent Arc of the story.

Character: I love it since I can witness the fluffy interaction between characters. 

I have nothing to complain about, but I am still hopeful about Mc's development. The MC is likeable, she is a bit too naive and kind as other Japanese Novel MC. But at least she is not dense as them.

If you want to find a cute novel to kill your free time, this may be a perfect fit for you.

I give the novel 4*, but to encourage the author to continue releasing daily I give him 5* at the end.

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There are SOOOOO MANY spelling and grammar issues in the very first few paragraphs alone, this is unreadable.

Just from the first few paragraphs, a random selection:

> I can't think anything straight

Without "anything", please

> My brain keeps informing me to keep sleeping and don't wake up

"and not wake up"

> -Don't be panic.

Sigh.

> The user is under the side effect of Hibernation mode.

"under the effect" - why "side effect", you can use "side effect" if you insist but then you will have to express it differently.

> I need to wake up properly to check the current situation.

Just "the situation" -- unfortunately the word "current" is frequently misused by people new to both English and writing.

> No abnormalities were detected, released the hibernation capsule.

Sigh.

> I gradually raised from the capsule.

Okay, enough of this! Note that I'm still able to see the start of the novel from where I copied this from, all in just half a page of text. This is a new record, and I know a few atrociously written webnovels on several sites.

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One word to describe this entire WN: fluffy.

This story has a heavy orientation on fluffiness and the plot is not too thick. The MC is so cute and adorable all the time. One of those WN where you just stop thinking and enjoy the fluff. I must admit tho, that the MC is a bit dumb but its nothing too detrimental and compliments the fluffy and cutesy aspect of the story.

The background of the world is a decent bit more complex than other isekais (not really an isekai but basically an isekai, more like a fantasy instead of transmigration since its technically the same universe as earth) but you can just think it as a multi-planet fantasy with the MC being the only full human alive.

The only notable problem of the story is its initial writing quality. The grammar is horrendous during the first arc and a bit into the second arc. However, if you can bear with it, the writing gradually improves as the story progresses and the writer's skills improve.

Lastly, this WN has A LOT of different POVs as interludes. Personally, I don't like having too much other POVs but I'll be pragmatic and ignore this.

Overall, a 4/5 from me. Pretty good but with its own problems. Read if you want a story where you can just turn off your brain and enjoy the fluff.

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This one is one of the first few novels I read on SH. The story is really enjoyable and full of fluffiness.

Though MC is an airhead, it's her selling point and what makes her so adorable.

This one is the best when it comes to healing yourself after reading those drama and tragedy novels.

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Dropped on 40 chp.

1) There is a completely dull system of forces, LVL and other things. Completely inappropriate and useless for the novel. 

2) There are a million and one world conspiracies, gods, apostles and other nonsense. But what is not there is world building.

3) There is also not enough of the promised fluff. The author tries, but given the "clarity" (it's lack) of the characters, it doesn't come out very well.

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