It reads kinda like a translated fic (weird grammar mistakes),
I can see why no one has stuck around very long for this story. It starts at the middle! The story starts on his second death and resurrection (yes in same body) its kinda lame to be honest. Idk. He isnt even surprised by the system...
I really like the story and if the author gets a good editor it could be really enjoyable but in its current state its painful to read and I cant recommend it. I will change my review when the author improves or gets an editor.
This novel did a hilarious twist with Danzo. While this novel has waxuia feel to it, with some cultivation and sword elements. The biggest issue is power scaling. The author probably noticed it and created a road block, such as spirit energy is stuck at 49.9, or the physical road block. Not saying its wrong to do it, but having to relay on the store for everything makes the character loose some of its own agency. It's I can do so because I have money to get this, when it would be more interesting, if I combine what I know about cultivation and combine it with a naruto world and whatever low level cultivation technique to make something new. Overall, it's a ok story with some hic ups, like how forced the kyuubi attack preparation was. OH I HAD A DREAM THAT sh*t WENT DOWN, BELIEVE IT! Hokage was like, sounds completely believable, I better take your advice completely seriously and follow YOUR lead.
Si Vis Pacem -‖- Para Bellum [Naruto FanFic]
Death claims all of us in a timely fashion, but some are granted a second chance.
Armed with ambition, megalomania, and pride alone, an innocent girl reincarnates into the vast world of
Alex was an ordinary person with the dream of one day being transmigrated to a magical world.
But what he didn’t expect is that he would be transmigrated to a world much more than that, a world he knew very well, but instead of being
A medical student died because of negligence of the authorities. Later, he is granted a second chance in life with some boons. But being an Otaku and Naruto fan, he chooses to live in the chaotic world of Naruto.
The story will follow canon
It reads kinda like a translated fic (weird grammar mistakes),
I can see why no one has stuck around very long for this story. It starts at the middle! The story starts on his second death and resurrection (yes in same body) its kinda lame to be honest. Idk. He isnt even surprised by the system...
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I really like the story and if the author gets a good editor it could be really enjoyable but in its current state its painful to read and I cant recommend it. I will change my review when the author improves or gets an editor.
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This novel did a hilarious twist with Danzo. While this novel has waxuia feel to it, with some cultivation and sword elements. The biggest issue is power scaling. The author probably noticed it and created a road block, such as spirit energy is stuck at 49.9, or the physical road block. Not saying its wrong to do it, but having to relay on the store for everything makes the character loose some of its own agency. It's I can do so because I have money to get this, when it would be more interesting, if I combine what I know about cultivation and combine it with a naruto world and whatever low level cultivation technique to make something new. Overall, it's a ok story with some hic ups, like how forced the kyuubi attack preparation was. OH I HAD A DREAM THAT sh*t WENT DOWN, BELIEVE IT! Hokage was like, sounds completely believable, I better take your advice completely seriously and follow YOUR lead.
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