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It reads kinda like a translated fic (weird grammar mistakes),
I can see why no one has stuck around very long for this story. It starts at the middle! The story starts on his second death and resurrection (yes in same body) its kinda lame to be honest. Idk. He isnt even surprised by the system...
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I really like the story and if the author gets a good editor it could be really enjoyable but in its current state its painful to read and I cant recommend it. I will change my review when the author improves or gets an editor.
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This novel did a hilarious twist with Danzo. While this novel has waxuia feel to it, with some cultivation and sword elements. The biggest issue is power scaling. The author probably noticed it and created a road block, such as spirit energy is stuck at 49.9, or the physical road block. Not saying its wrong to do it, but having to relay on the store for everything makes the character loose some of its own agency. It's I can do so because I have money to get this, when it would be more interesting, if I combine what I know about cultivation and combine it with a naruto world and whatever low level cultivation technique to make something new. Overall, it's a ok story with some hic ups, like how forced the kyuubi attack preparation was. OH I HAD A DREAM THAT sh*t WENT DOWN, BELIEVE IT! Hokage was like, sounds completely believable, I better take your advice completely seriously and follow YOUR lead.
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