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Author I believe this novel is good so don't think about dropping it because lack of readers ?????????
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Could be spicier, has some syntax errors, and there's some other minor issues, but it's good. 4.5 is pretty accurate.
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Pretty good novel. I like the concept and story. Only a few problems to be addressed:
1. Don't drag out the revealing of the catastrophic event too much, this should be completely told out by ch140 at the max or it'll feel slow, boring or annoying that we still don't know after all this reading.
2. Related to the first thing, you're dropping a LOT (maybe even too much) loose ends.
For example, what happened to Yuki's sister (My first thoughts were arranged marriage, death, or ntr), who is Robot and why can she avoid an entire company's attempts to find her, the whole raped girl and her childhood friend situation, the background of MC parents (needs to explain why they interacting with heirs and law firm presidents), why the MC shows almost no frustration at being kept from a secret that literally everyone except him knows (honestly at this point, I'm expecting an emotional outburst or anger from the MC because this is a very frustrating situation).
TLDR: Don't drag suspense too long, and finish important loose ends.
PS. HAREM IS ALWAYS WIN.
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Pretty good story. There are some action, romance and mystery. Sadly I can't read it longer because there is too much if mystery just not my type od story. But I recommend start it and decide yourself.
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