I would give the story 4.5 but there's no such a thing so I will instead round it up into a five.
The story so far doesn't have any glaring grammatical mistakes that would make reading it hard or painful. Plus.
The setting is a big while before the canon of the series so we will hopefully derail it enough that the story is new and exciting, so far it's great. Plus.
The author has so far stuck into the canon mindset of characters making them feel like their original counterparts instead of cheap OCs disguised as such. Plus.
So far so good. Now onto small negatives.
While the story is great, I feel like there is little worldbuilding, whether the setting itself or descriptions of things around the main character. Hopefully, that will change but it is still a great read as is.
The only thing that I can see in the future that might lower this review is how the author will handle Gojo as he becomes truly overpowered. Writing such characters is infinitely harder than creating an underdog that climbs the power staircase or tries to handle their powers.
It’s kinda unique and refreshing. I love it, and I know there are more chapters on webnovel but everytime I go to webnovel I feel like I lose brain cells.
This fanfic follows Gojo who's soul went to Bleach world after he died. He lost (can't use) his abilities except his eyes, therefore to find away to regain his power, he decides to become a shinigami. The story was written well, and characters likewise. Maybe due to Bleach story arcs being complicated, it is likely dropped/halted. Still it's worth reading and prob top 3 in the whole Bleach world fanfic.
Ps: my fav part is he bangs a few girls just as he entered the shinigami academy and adds them as only 's*xfriend'XD (lol)
It's pretty good so far I'd say. A solid read with Gojo of course as an awesome MC. He's in Bleach, one of my favorite animes, so I'd say that's awesome. Most Side Characters aren't left out much and have quite a bit of detail in them. The setting and surroundings AKA / World Building is good, not a Bob Ross with words, but good. Has a readable syntax with good line spacing for an easier read, though there are a few mistakes here and there, negligible and even funny. (Rating - Down Below)
This is some high level fanfiction, with author having really lot of knowledge about original story. Writing is great and comfortable to read. It has little of everything.
Alex Quill went back in time, and now he has a second chance to get everything right. He will no longer be a failure in life; instead, he will profit from his future knowledge… or so he thought.
The only disadvantage is that, while he
I would give the story 4.5 but there's no such a thing so I will instead round it up into a five.
The story so far doesn't have any glaring grammatical mistakes that would make reading it hard or painful. Plus.
The setting is a big while before the canon of the series so we will hopefully derail it enough that the story is new and exciting, so far it's great. Plus.
The author has so far stuck into the canon mindset of characters making them feel like their original counterparts instead of cheap OCs disguised as such. Plus.
So far so good. Now onto small negatives.
While the story is great, I feel like there is little worldbuilding, whether the setting itself or descriptions of things around the main character. Hopefully, that will change but it is still a great read as is.
The only thing that I can see in the future that might lower this review is how the author will handle Gojo as he becomes truly overpowered. Writing such characters is infinitely harder than creating an underdog that climbs the power staircase or tries to handle their powers.
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It’s kinda unique and refreshing. I love it, and I know there are more chapters on webnovel but everytime I go to webnovel I feel like I lose brain cells.
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This fanfic follows Gojo who's soul went to Bleach world after he died. He lost (can't use) his abilities except his eyes, therefore to find away to regain his power, he decides to become a shinigami. The story was written well, and characters likewise. Maybe due to Bleach story arcs being complicated, it is likely dropped/halted. Still it's worth reading and prob top 3 in the whole Bleach world fanfic.
Ps: my fav part is he bangs a few girls just as he entered the shinigami academy and adds them as only 's*xfriend'XD (lol)
no harem, no romance, only 's*xfriend'
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It's pretty good so far I'd say. A solid read with Gojo of course as an awesome MC. He's in Bleach, one of my favorite animes, so I'd say that's awesome. Most Side Characters aren't left out much and have quite a bit of detail in them. The setting and surroundings AKA / World Building is good, not a Bob Ross with words, but good. Has a readable syntax with good line spacing for an easier read, though there are a few mistakes here and there, negligible and even funny. (Rating - Down Below)
Main Character: 5/5
Side Characters: 4.7/5
World Building: 4.8/5
Syntax-Punctuation: 4.7/5
Overall Rating: 4.8/5
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This is some high level fanfiction, with author having really lot of knowledge about original story. Writing is great and comfortable to read. It has little of everything.
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A good read. Just give it a try and you'll see.
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