With his fiancé having been stolen by his (supposedly) kind-hearted and merciful younger brother, Sun Fang decides to take the high road. (To the surprise of everyone who's ever known him.) Instead of fighting to get his cheating fiancé back, Sun Fang sets out to fully enjoy the wealth of his family. After all, he's no longer the heir (his younger brother took that too) which means that he has no responsibilities. Ah, the life of a worry-free rich young master is really the best!
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Generally, I'm not the biggest fan of omegaverse because the "alpha" and "omega" stereotypes and differences are so overdramatized. However, I do enjoy calmer fluffy stories and I found just that here. Furthermore, there's an element of secrecy and mystery in the main character that keeps you hooked to the story: why did the MC give up his family and life to his younger brother?
This and the periodic doses of fluff in the relationship between the ML and MC makes this story a very pleasant and enjoyable read. It's very easy to get boring with calm fluffy stories like this but for now I'm really enjoying this one. The writing is also structured well so thanks for writing FantasyDeath!
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While I love the slice of life genre and completely understand the angle you were trying to take with this book, I also can see exactly how you missed the mark. I suggest you go watch Natsume Yuujinchou if you haven't before. There you can see how it's done correctly. Yes, there is slight angst but it's always resolved in a slow paced and calming manner which gives readers/viewers a relaxed and refreshed feeling. In your attempt all it gave me was anxiety and a feeling of unfinished business. Like the ML was just ignoring and running away from his problems while they just grew and grew. Hope I'm explaining it correctly ? Anyways, I still read the entire thing. Thank you for the effort. Looking forward to your future works.
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It's like psychological fluff. A relaxing slice-of-life, but the characters and their relationships are so vividly detailed that it gets you thinking a lot.
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Same review as Aeris910 said. Even though I kinda wanted to drop midway through the story I feel like this has potential and thats the reason why I kept reading till the end. There were parts that were good and parts that were meh. It was an okay read. I hope that the missing thing this story needed would be incorporated in the final version. Though I wouldn't be able to read it coz I dont have money hahahaha.
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