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Death March — Fixed
Death March — Fixed
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This is a remake/fanfiction of Death March. This story is about a poor, overworked (Virgin) programmer called Alex Conner, who is summoned to a game-like fantasy world. In this new world, he accidentally gains immense power, and slave-girls who are willing to sleep with him. Follow our MC on his journey of sightseeing and fun...and killing Demons.

To the people who think this fix is the same as the original: https://www.sousetsuka.com/p/blog-page_15.html (The original, try to make it far enough through to compare them :P )

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AdventureFanfictionFantasyHaremIsekaiRomance
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Death March to the Parallel World Rhapsody
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Age Regression Based on an Anime Beastkin Demi-Humans Devoted Love Interests Fantasy World Human-Nonhuman Relationship Lack of Common Sense Polygamy Programmer R-15 R-18 Reincarnation Romantic Subplot Slave Harem Slaves
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    Overlordkelton
    Status: vol 7 – chapter 9 – getting to know...

    The only difference is that this non japanese MC is more murdery. And not shy in touching his slaves. That's the parts in the original that I didn't like, pretty much being a simp and a hypocrite.

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    Kruncs
    Status: vol 4 – chapter 1 – a noble way...

    Pretty much a copy of the story after 3 "volumes" and only real difference is the transmigrators are English instead of Japanese, yet they are still otakus. Mostly gave it a 2, instead of 1, because at least it wasn't a major butchering of the original, but not much more going for itself to warrant reading it over the original.

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    bingo
    Status: vol 3 ch 1

    Like every one says pretty much a direct copy and the few thing that have been changed does not affect or change the story in any major way why go thru all this trouble if your going to do so little ?

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    Nasrah
    Status: vol 10 – chapter 4 – adventurer’s guild

    In general, a summary leaving 90% of the series and original dialogues untouched, basically the MC is not a typical Japanese prince, so he is not ashamed to play as much as he wants, I change the plot to add a blacksmith, a blacksmith that he left lying and practically forgotten, in theory the blacksmith would have to make the team, but in between the dialogues he says that "he" is working or made the team. Among many other things, it is basically a copy paste of sousetsuka in which he removes some parts or capts that could be considered political.

    I liked the initiative to "correct" the original series, but this resulted in practically a carbon copy of it.

    Pd: English is not my native language

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    Aswad
    Status: v2c3

    I did not read Death March.

    I was expecting this to be entertaining, because everything should be new to me; and if this is a fix, then it should be better.. Well I made it to the second VOLUME without seeing anything interesting.

    If this is a fix then the actual Death March must be garbage (was it also vague as all get out?).

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    Jrus000999
    Status: volume 10 chapter 28

    Basically Trash, it's just the same as the original like what the others said, the character's personality hasn't changed. I thought it would be better than the original, unfortunately it's not, it's even more incomplete (like omitting a bunch of scenes and details: especially that one where he and Toruma goes to that place where he bought some books and scrolls and the author literally just summarized it in a few words as though saying they went there bought scrolls and got some books then left). Moreover, and most importantly IT'S NOT ORIGINAL, nothing about this one is original, it's basically just a copy and paste, but the name of the main character is different, there's also the added dwarf girl that was literally forgotten, and the snu snu and flirting scenes that you can skip. Most of the chapters can be skipped (like the perspective change since some of it is cringy and doesn't actually give much fresh perspective and more like a summary of some events and an inner monologue of that person) since it's more like filler than something that contributes to the story (though the original was also the same), you can skip all those and just go straight directly to the fights (like that fight with the first Demon Lord) or when he gains some abilities from scrolls or from his own experiments and tries it, I do hope the author would change and rewrite everything from the start and make it better and ACTUALLY make each chapter (scenes) contribute something to later chapters and not just a complete nonsense copy and paste. 

    There's also that scene in seryuu city where he was fighting a demon and literally having difficulties defeating it even though he's so high leveled (like what's the point of the leveling system? Just for the sake of having high hp and mp? I thought having a high level also means having high attack power, defense, etc.), the original was also the same but this one claims to be better.

    Maybe change the MC's personality from being a super naive humble stupid idiot that hides his powers but doesn't actually know how to hide it without being annoying to the readers (like in that one town or city where they met that pink haired princess, I really thought he would reveal even a bit more of his powers since he has those titles given by the Baron or his hero title that he oh so equipped so that people can see it). Or also making him have a bit of pride as a man and human being rather than a complete typical very polite Japanese transmigrator (like come one, he's an english man now) who just keeps quiet and is a suck up even though he's being mocked, looked down or so.

    There's also the sine nomine persona, thought he would be less cringe but it's even more in this one (super gay), the grammar is also questionable, like you already have a complete novel reference and you just copy and pasted it yet you still made grammatical errors many times, some words are even missing or some sentences just don't make sense.

    Also some of the chapters are cringe as heck, and very unpleasant to read like the ones with getting to know tama and pochi (as someone who read the original, they are just kids), maybe you should have changed their personality a bit and not let them act like little kids (or maybe you're just into Lolis, like having s*xual relationship with kids)

    The author also didn't try to improve the other characters like Karina, Arisa (especially with her annoying personality, based on this one, where she suddenly clings to the MC so much and refuses to leave him and wants to go with him even though she already knows he's so strong though it was about politics at that time, and then when they arrive at that place where the Golden Boar King Demon lord got resurrected, she just let's him go like oh yeah be back soon, like the Author literally just removed that one scene from the original), the KNIGHT Liza also acted differently and it's quite uncanny (she acts out of character very suddenly), the hero Hayato (maybe make him more respectable rather than even more annoying and cringy).

    If you want to try this one for a serious read, I'm advising you to drop that idea and just read the original 

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     i have read the whole wn  and nothing has changed from the orignal except he put his hands on his girls and the drawf slave that was not in the orignal story what we readers truly want to see is MC standing up for his dignity and not getting looked down upon everytime he kissing @--es everywhere while he is a literel god he is acting like the usual jap beta or perv even that jap pedo hero hyato and his team gets recidnized world wide while the are just shrimps who cant ever defeat a high class deamon toghether and the MC defeated 4 and and demonlord not counting the lowlel ones and the strongass monsters he casully defeats this is frustrating, now u said its because of the troubles he keep low profile from what I have read his main enemies know his powers and keeping their eyes on him from the shadows and he should have learned by now that keeping a low profile will even attract bugs not scare them away aurthor please improve the MC behaviour he shoould get respect like a badass and the story is just getting to the main part u still have a chance of redenmption 

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