It has a potential until the plot became forced. Got his first monster stolen and accused of an unknown crime. He then got put into a concentration camp. Which makes me wonder, what the hell is going on? How did it happen?. It feels like there's no substance or any life for each characters to start. Just a draft on where to start the main storyline... If instead of forcing him into a concentration camp, just a military school arc then it is acceptable, and the egg... Right the egg... Why did they stole it from him? And why did he just blatantly ignore the fact that the his egg got stolen from!. Instead of reporting it to the authorities and seeking immediate help. He just went to a egg store and brought from there. Another thing, his parents are f'ing missing!, And their freaking house got destoyed!. Where the hell are they!?. Even I would freaking run out of my office if my house got destoyed!..
The story is like any other of its kind nothing new the setting is kinda cool with a mesh of two common troupes that is something that is very interesting since it's not done often but it gets beaten down by the fact that we have to stay in the same places and see nothing interesting the characters are walking cardboard cutouts the hook as what I can see is the monster tamer part of it but it's kinda like any other of its kind now at this point in the review you may be asking why I am giving it four stars it's because I see genuine potential for a good story it feels like it's setting the blueprint for a good story that I am not going to stop others from reading sure at this point of the story everything is kinda meh but I believe in the author to take this blueprint for a successful interesting story and create something that I would want to read this story is the kind that rewards the patient and I believe would give a good payout and ending and I can't wait for it to happen
A questionable progression if the storyline...
It has a potential until the plot became forced. Got his first monster stolen and accused of an unknown crime. He then got put into a concentration camp. Which makes me wonder, what the hell is going on? How did it happen?. It feels like there's no substance or any life for each characters to start. Just a draft on where to start the main storyline... If instead of forcing him into a concentration camp, just a military school arc then it is acceptable, and the egg... Right the egg... Why did they stole it from him? And why did he just blatantly ignore the fact that the his egg got stolen from!. Instead of reporting it to the authorities and seeking immediate help. He just went to a egg store and brought from there. Another thing, his parents are f'ing missing!, And their freaking house got destoyed!. Where the hell are they!?. Even I would freaking run out of my office if my house got destoyed!..
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The story is like any other of its kind nothing new the setting is kinda cool with a mesh of two common troupes that is something that is very interesting since it's not done often but it gets beaten down by the fact that we have to stay in the same places and see nothing interesting the characters are walking cardboard cutouts the hook as what I can see is the monster tamer part of it but it's kinda like any other of its kind now at this point in the review you may be asking why I am giving it four stars it's because I see genuine potential for a good story it feels like it's setting the blueprint for a good story that I am not going to stop others from reading sure at this point of the story everything is kinda meh but I believe in the author to take this blueprint for a successful interesting story and create something that I would want to read this story is the kind that rewards the patient and I believe would give a good payout and ending and I can't wait for it to happen
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