After drowning in a flood caused by a tsunami, a mediocre man is given the opportunity to become something greater in his next life, to avoid living another life filled with regret he chooses to obtain the power to set mental save points he can load at any time to redo any decision or action he wishes, or simply relive his greatest achievements.
*Experimental first story*
*I'm doing a detailed rewrite after having sought some advice from friends that boiled down to it bad need more word. Obviously the real conversation was a lot more professional than that but along with that I'm running a discord server for the story in case people want to discuss it and you know... hear me spoil the hell out of it (kidding or not?) and talk about the progress. Here's the link: (https://discord.gg/QFYXCUYchV)*
*Chapters Left to Edit: 49*
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Hiatus - Updated Sep 17, 2021
Last updated 3 years ago
- 513 reading
- 50 plan to read
- 5 completed
- 27 paused
- 55 dropped
I just can't feel that he cares about the characters or the people who he met. Like in his first 3 or 4 lives he seems like he is developing his relationships, but the next lives he takes a different route and he seems to forget about everybody.
This story acts like a real game and for me it hurts this story.
I liked the story but it got boring later on... By the way this might not be a proper review.
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This story has an interesting premise but it was poorly executed. Trying to be many thing but in the end being none of them.
SHORT VERSION:
This novel is a fast pace novel with none relatable and blank characters, total misuse of the time travel, unimaginative unarousing s*x scenes and a story that fails to draw you in.
LONG VERSION:
The time lops instead of spicing up the story make it feel hollow, you are not worried about anything bad happening to the MC or the characters he loves. Instead they make him stupid (if he fails he will try again immediately in the same stupid way as before instead of trying to improve himself, he is even told this is what he is doing but he ignore it)
The main character faces no difficulties and has no relatable backstory. He becomes op immediately without doing anything. I believe that was intentional with the Adult, Harem and Smut tags but that is where the problem arises if that was the goal, the s*x scenes feel dry and not at all arousing.
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