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Cultivation Retirement Plan (BL)
Cultivation Retirement Plan (BL)
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Characters
Fei Chenling (Sect Leader Senior Brother)

Chinese: 斐塵翎

Fei - (of literary talent) striking, brilliant; elegant/graceful
Chen - dust & dirt, euphemism for the world of mortals
Ling - plume, tail feather, quill

Former Mt. Linglong peak lord. The young, powerful, but quick-tempered leader of Star Pavilion Sect and the oldest of the previous sect leader's five disciples. He sees himself as a caretaker to his junior siblings foremost and oftentimes places his responsibilities as sect leader on the back burner. Has a special fondness for his youngest junior brother, Mo Yixuan. 

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Jun Zhen (3rd Senior Brother)

Chinese: 君貞

Jun - prince, monarch, sovereign
Zhen  - loyal, faithful, virtuous

Mo Yixuan's senior brother who holds a grudge against him. Sources say Mo Yixuan somehow caused his legs to be crippled with an ice affliction that requires treatment by the sect leader every month. His mind is also rather unstable...

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Mo Yixuan (MC)

Chinese: 陌逸軒

Mo - raised path, street.
Yi - ease, leisure; escape, flee; to withdraw from the world & be a recluse, to be lost or excel.
Xuan - high, lofty; pavilion with a view.

Mt. Jingting peak lord. The main character (MC) of the story. A man who died in his mid-thirties to transmigrate into the body of a prominent Peak Lord of the Star Pavilion Sect. The original was a two-faced wretch with delusions of grandeur, but his replacement just wants the world to leave him alone. 

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Modern Version (with hypothetical blue eyes):

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Mu Yelian (5th Junior Sister)

Chinese: 穆夜蓮

Mu - surname that means solemn, reverence, calm.
Yelian - night lotus.

Mt. Luojia peak lord. The youngest of the five disciples under the previous sect leader, and the only girl. As she was close in age to Mo Yixuan, she feels closest to him out of all her senior brothers and crushes on him actively. Peak Lord of Mt. Luojia, which trains the sect's female disciples and specializes in healing; however, she herself is also a consummate master of poisons. Simple and childish, she's rather spoiled but means well. 

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Nan Wuyue (ML1, Disciple)

Chinese: 南無月

Nan - south.
Wuyue - moonless, without a moon.

The male lead (ML) of the story and Mo Yixuan’s core disciple, making him the highest ranked student amongst his master’s charges. Once a naive and innocent boy, he turned twisted under his master’s abuse and maltreatment. The current Nan Wuyue possesses his soul from ten years later and is hellbent on revenge, specifically against his scum master Mo Yixuan.

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(Note that Nan Wuyue at the start of the story is 15 years old. These are his adult visualizations.)



Joke Modern Verse Nan Wuyue:

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Ouyang Che (2nd Senior Brother)

Chinese: 歐陽澈

Ouyang - a two character surname. Ou can mean "to sing, a ballad," Yang is "positive," the yang in "yin yang."
Che - (of water) clear, thorough.


Second oldest of Mo Yixuan's senior brothers, a scholarly type skilled in the medical arts. Although intelligent, he is also lazy. Rumors have it that he was on bad terms with the original Mo Yixuan, but he seems to take a special interest in his replacement and actively helps him out. Besides Mo Yixuan, he's only member of Star Pavilion Sect with the power to change the sect leader's mind.

Visual Inspiration:

Joke Modern Verse Ouyang:

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Shangguan Yin (Former Co-Worker)

Chinese: 上官隱

Shangguan - a two-character surname. Can also mean "high-ranking official, superior."

Yin - secret, hidden, concealed.


Mo Yixuan's junior at his old company back in the modern world. A man whose soft-spoken visage hides a greedy, empty hole of a heart, and the ultimate cause of Mo Yixuan's death.

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Shi Feng (ML2, Half-Immortal)

Chinese: 世風

Shi - the world.
Feng - the wind.

The second male lead (ML #2) of the story. A powerful yet reclusive cultivator who watches over the border between the High and Middle Realms (where Star Pavilion Sect is located). His age is unknown but his cultivation is closest to that of godhood, making him a relic of an ancient time. Open and forthright, he is also used to getting what he wants.

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Ye Xinglin (Master, Former Sect Leader)

Chinese: 夜星嶙

Ye - night.
Xing - stars.
Lin - precipitous (of a mountain).


The founder and former sect leader of Star Pavilion Sect who created the Celestial Sublime Sword Style inspired by the constellations in the 28 Lunar Mansions. Currently deceased. A remarkable cultivator who sent shockwaves through the Middle Realms when he was still alive.

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An Chengyan (Disciple, Jun Zhen)

An Chengyan (安程焱)

An - peace.
Cheng - rule/regulation, journey, distance.
Yan - flame.

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Peak Lord Jun Zhen’s current disciple, though apparently not by his own choice. A young teen with delicate features, he doesn’t like to speak much and takes care of Jun Zhen’s daily needs.

Location
Three Realms and Netherworld

The three realms in the story are based on cultivation strength rather than physical location. Please read on for further instructions:

  • Lower Realms - Home to humans and Yao, or beastkin/natural spirits. The Yao were once part of the Middle Realms but suffered catastrophic defeat during the Three Realms War around 200 years ago, thus leaving most of their tribes scattered and/or destroyed.
  • Middle Realms - Demonic and celestial cultivators. While the celestial cultivation sects actually exist on a floating continent above the Lower Realms, most demonic sects prefer to stay in sections of the Lower Realm rife with demonic energy, also known as the Demon Realm.
  • Higher Realms - Home to gods and immortals, sealed up thousands of years ago.
  • Netherworld - Home to the dead souls and ghosts, location of King Yama's court. Technically considered separate from the Three Realms as it can't be accessed by the living through normal means. 

3 Types ofYao (妖)

  • Yaojing (妖精) - any Yao who possesses sentience and the ability to cultivate into human form. Runs the gamut from peony spirits (plants), pipa spirits (objects), or animals. The jing in their names referred to “refinement."
  • Yaomo (妖魔) - Yao who willingly embrace and enlighten on a demonic path, 
  • Yaoguai (妖怪) - Yao who prefer to stay in their true, monstrous forms as plants or beasts.
Star Pavilion Sect

Located in the highest current point of the Middle Realms, Nine Heavens Range. Has nine peaks for each of its nine peak lords as well as a central arena for greeting guests. Below the arena lies the ice prisons powered by the demonic core of an ice serpent one slayed by its founder, Ye Xinglin. 

Their practitioners train in the Celestial Sublime Sword Style inspired by the 28 Lunar Mansions of the Chinese constellations, divided into 4 Houses with 7 Movements each:

  • Dance of the Azure Dragon - Speedy offensive style (think DPS)
  • Steps of the Black Tortoise - Defensive arrays, delay tactics, mitigation
  • Roar of the White Tiger - Raw power offensive style
  • Song of the Vermillion Bird - Subterfuge, illusions, misc skills

Name Origins: Inspired by its high-altitude geographic location which offered excellent views of the night sky, thus helping former Sect Leader Ye perfect his sword techniques. He used to call the sect grounds his stage to dance for the Heavens, his pavilion of endless stars.

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Iridescent Radiance Sect (IRS)

A cultivation sect focused on checks and balances whose disciples believe in the cycles of karma and retribution as well as the revolutionary practice of taking a percentage of members' monthly spirit stone payments to support sect upkeep costs.

Their practitioners train in the Three Branches Sword Style which consists of:

  • Ruler - Creating laws for the battlefield
  • Executor - Upholding laws in the battlefield
  • Judge - Disseminating opponents' movements and limits based on the grasp of law

Name Origins: "Law is ever immutable, changing with the time and place. Only the principle of Rule and Obey remain constant, and the cultivators themselves decide the limits, just as how iridescence itself is a constantly changing stream of colors without any one set hue."

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tbh this is just a meme sect based on the IRS and U.S. gov't don't sue me pls

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Story Arcs
Stonecut Valley Arc (C25-???)

NOTE: Listed in order of appearance. Be wary of labeled chapter spoilers!

Su Shiyu (蘇詩紆)

Shi - poetry.
Yu - to tie or bend; winding, tortuous.

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The eldest son and current patriarch of the Su Clan, an old and wealthy family of merchants who deal in jade mining. His family controls the largest deposit of jade in Stonecut Valley. Although he appears to be in his late 30s, half of his hair has already turned white. A reserved and upright man with the trappings of a gentleman, though it's rumored that he has a short temper.

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Bai Tingyao (白婷瑶) 

Bai - white. 
Ting - graceful. 
Yao - precious jade. 

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Known as Lady Bai, she is the wife of Su Shiyu. An intelligent, capable woman with a highly independent streak who has her husband wrapped around her metaphorical finger. Dotes on her darling Mengmeng to a fault, or as she puts it, “Everything my Mengmeng does is adorable!” She has a three-year old son named Su Lingxiao (蘇凌霄), nicknamed Ah-Xiao.

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Spoiler for C30 - "Mengmeng"

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Su Shimeng (蘇詩朦)

Shi - poetry.
Meng - dim, hazy, indistinct.

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The son by the second wife of the former Su Clan Head, he was a sickly child who was given a girl’s name to appease the resentful yin energy targeting him. However, due to this and his nickname “Mengmeng” (萌萌),  many mistook him as a girl growing up. 

At the age of eight, he was discovered to have an excellent foundation for cultivation and taken away to Iridescent Radiance Sect (IRS), where he eventually attained the rank of inner disciple. Has a rocky relationship with his half-brother Su Shiyu, but is adored and pampered by his sister-in-law Bai Tingyao.

Often appears angry, but his bark is worse than his bite.

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Spoiler for C31 - Ghost Girl

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“Jade Ghost” (Real name unknown)

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The ghostly spirit haunting the Su Clan for the past 17 years and assisting them from the shadows. She appears as a young teenage girl who greatly resembles Old Madam Su (the second wife of Su Pinglu, the previous Su Clan Head) in her youth. Although harmless for most of her (dead) life, she has supposedly turned violent after her essence mixed with demonic qi.

For some reason, she and Su Shiyu share the same strange, bloodthirsty scent.

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Spoilers for C36 - Ah-Xiao, Su Yan'er, Ting'er

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Su Lingxiao (蘇凌霄)

Lingxiao - to “reach up to Heaven, soar to the skies.” Also a name for the Chinese trumpet creeper, a type of vine with red/orange flowers.

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The young three-year-old son of Su Shiyu and Bai Tingyao. He is his father’s pride and his mother’s joy. His nickname is "Ah-Xiao."

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Su Yan’er (蘇燕儿)

Yan’er - literally “little swallow.”

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The former Second Madam, now Old Madam Su and Su Shimeng’s mother. She was a handmaiden who caught the eye of the former Su Clan Head Su Pinglu and married him despite being only a few years older than his eldest son Su Shiyu. She outlived her former mistress, husband, and nearly Su Shiyu himself when the latter fell off a cliff. Known to have a special affection for the Jade Ghost despite falling ill due to its company every July.

She was the one who gave Su Shimeng his girl’s name. Currently in a coma and tended to by Bai Tingyao.

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Ting’er (葶儿)

Ting - short for 葶苈子, or yellow whitlow grass, a type of flowering plant used in traditional Chinese medicine.

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Bai Tingyao’s servant girl who came to work for Su Manor just under a year ago. She’s said to be a good and steady helper.

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Miscellaneous
Artworks

5 Years Later!Nan Wuyue x Mo Yixuan by Killokii for BL_Palace's May 2021 Anthology Chibi Banner

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    LimaBean
    Status: 13. motives and motivations (3)

    Quite the enjoyable read if I do say so myself. I just love how nonchalant the MC is, to the point where he's kinda dense in my favorite way! Everything, so far, makes some sort of sense. Like how the MC gained a body and why the ML hates the original (not MC) guy. It's not willy nilly like other novels where it's like "Oh MC is dead, but fret not!! He got another body!" But there's no explanation of the body's original soul. So it was nice of the author to explain the fate of the original soul. And a plus is that there's none of that INSTANT romance with an enemy, it's sometimes nice, but it's NICER having a good slow romance 

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    keitsu
    Status: 13. motives and motivations (3)

    Oh I like the way you right. Especially the ancient way of cursing, haha! The flow is very nice paced, looking forward to when many realised he is different yet way better, haha!

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    Yurika
    Status: c20

    Just finished reading chapter 20, so before I'm off to read other novels, this will be an encouragement to those who haven't discover this gem. 

    The story start out really good as the MC has his first life being described, how painful it was to point of 

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    ending his own life

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    despite this it keeps on driving me in, into the dept of no return, MC was a bit of a lack-life person both body and mind after the blow but this just make it more how much reality this could be flesh out by the author! 

    "Read!" "You must read!" This is goes straight into my top 5 must read list despite not having 'mpreg' tag on. Though, second after "The dumb husky and his white cat shizun" but consider this original not translation, this has top the list that I have read so far hundreds of novels including QT. 

    Finally, I just want to say, I LOVE YOU AUTHOR!

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    Aachiin0914
    Status: on going

    This is the first trasmigration novel I read where the MC didn't try to hug a big thigh.

    And also the first where the MC completely and with honestly want to cut ties with the former host relationship with others. 

    It's great and refreshing. And it didn't seems like a book too. But maybe it is but the MC just didn't have a chance to read it.

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    taeismybaby
    Status: 1. i live as i died,...

    I'm super enjoying this, but also shaking my head at Mo Yixuan. You can't just say you're going to try to kill someone when you know the body you're in was abusing them before!!! Omgosh I'm interested to see how Wuyue starts to fall in love.

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    xiaomangisbusy
    Status: 46. three lives, three worlds

    It starts off a very easy read. I can tell the author put a lot of effort into world-building as well as character profiles. I think those aspects are important for writing well fleshed-out xianxia novels. It made immersing myself in the story easier and improved my reading experience.

    The main characters are very well developed. Especially Nan Wuyue and Mo Yixuan. They each have their own unique and complex background and individual flaws which I find makes them a more dynamic duo. It's especially interesting to read whenever they interact.

    The imagery is lovely lovely lovely! I can picture everything that's happening just perfectly in my mind. The author's writing style uses a lot of visual adjectives that really paint a solid picture of what's going on.

    UNEXPECTED CONTENT:

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    The mystery arc that appeared halfway was a bit unexpected, but not unwelcome. With the timeline switching and various background information, it did take a bit more brainpower to read compared to the start of the novel, but I liked guessing and speculating as the chapters were published.

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    ENDING SPECULATIONS:

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    This may not end up 1v1 though (there are some undertones of a possible 3P ending so far) which some of you may consider a dealbreaker. I prefer 1v1 couple novels myself. Since this novel is not R18 though, I find that I don't particularly mind a possible 3P ending. It's also looking to be a slow burn... (prepare your impatient danmei hearts!)

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    I also loved the new character profiles at the end of each chapter as well as the links to Chinese songs. They make surprising little extras on top of an already lengthy chapter. If you're a danmei addict like me, you'll take all you can get hahaha.

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    Xunyi
    Status: reading ♡

    This! This is the kind of novel I wouldn't get tired of re-reading. It is written very well that it isn't impossible for someone to mistook it for a translation. Even I, who knows this is an original novel, doubt myself sometimes as I read. Totally recommended!

    I can't really put my love for this book into words so I won't be writing a long review. However, author - sama, I am so proud of you. This novel is a real work of art! (•̀ W •́) ✧

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