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CHAPTER ELEVEN: SOLACEJun 15, 2019
CHAPTER TEN: DEJECTEDJun 13, 2019
CHAPTER NINE: AT THE CROSSROADSJun 13, 2019
CHAPTER EIGHT: LOOKING FOR YOUJun 11, 2019
CHAPTER SEVEN: TOGETHERJun 9, 2019
CHAPTER SIX: UNEXPLAINEDJun 7, 2019
CHAPTER FIVE: THE BEGINNINGJun 6, 2019
CHAPTER FOUR: LOST YOUJun 5, 2019
CHAPTER THREE: JOURNEY FORWARDJun 3, 2019
CHAPTER TWO: THE TRANSFORMATIONMay 31, 2019
CHAPTER ONE: THE CHASEMay 31, 2019

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Haerether

Status: Chapter Three

Jun 4, 2019

..i-its so.. beautiful...

the story of the MC is slowly unraveled to the readers. there was no forced part of the story or anything. everything is so natural, that its almost like the author is the MC. the other characters were like real people, they have their own personalities, and their relationship to the MC is also explained well.

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my eyes welled up in the 2nd chapter. Nelly's relationship with her mother is really special. she is depressed and confused, but her mother was always there for her. especially the part when Nelly found out the reason her mother was always so fast in response to her cries when she had nightmares-- and then what happened 2 weeks after that-- *sniffs*

there was no dramatic shouting or anything cliche about Nelly's issue either, and I really like that.

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