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The premise is good, but thats about the all the credit I can give.
MC is a manipulative A hole, I really cant see how the romance will come into play.
Extremely unreasonable,
1 year old child being told by his teacher to run miles? Doing 1000pushups?
Weird/unfitting wording used. Such as using, "wives (or husbands if the heir is female) " instead of spouses. Or describing a new character as whatever, then MC "laughs at him supressing his rage" where did the anger come from?
The girl (FL im guessing?) Doesnt seem real at all. (She seems to have some development so she isnt completely cardboard later on.)
Ultimately, I was able to enjoy it for the most part, due to the premise seeming fun, and the plot which is enjoyable as well. The reason I am giving up on this novel is because originally I was mostly interested in the relationship between the MC and fl, as well as the plot. One chapter I relized that the MC is bassically the type of MC that I hate (repetitive, edgy, robotic, emotionless) and that the plot is actually just a joke and hardly matters at all.
Plot: MC has a soul contract with his mistress, must protec.
Real plot: MC is a dude who is playing a vr game for work that puts him in a body in another realm. Aka, he wont even die if he disobeys the contract, this whole story is also just a job for him aparently.
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Here we have a story filled with few mysteries and full of twists. Our protagonist Vince has goals that are unknown but are hinted upon early on. We see his growth and power up as he seeks knowledge and strength. At the same time he must look after his annoying and cute little mistress who is just as talented as himself. Good action and well written characters. More depths to the characters and some backstories here and there would spice things up. Along with some humor.
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