Magic? True magic doesn't exist!
Huh? I was reincarnated in a fantasy world where people can conjure fireballs and teleport at will? That won't fool me! These are definitely cheap tricks that only sheep will fall for!
Wait, my family is made up entirely of mages!? That's it, I will not stand for this farce. I'm going to prove to this new world that their fake magic is trash and I'm right!
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First time author here, feedback is much appreciated! Don't worry about being nice, the more insults you throw, the more likely it is that I'm going to listen to your advice. XD
A refined, good novel.
I see very few shortcomings regarding grammar, flow, characters, time skips, progression and story.
Many novels have a glaring flaw in one or more of these aspects, and as such feel very amateurish, but I can not pinpoint any in this one.
The main thing that truly stands out about this novel is the protagonist. His complete rejection of magic in a magic dominated world might take the novel into a very unique, unknown and mysterious direction, and by chapter 4 the gears have already started to turn.
Recommended for those who enjoy well refined novels with an outlandish protagonist that pulls the story into an unexpected direction.
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It’s funny, action packed, intriguing, and fun.
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