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So. I knew what I was getting into with that first chapter. But I was looking for something to scratch one particular itch, so I powered through anyway. And honestly, it scratched the itch. If you're looking for a horny, futanari bunny-girl eager to impregnate every woman who lays eyes on her hefty, (named) tool, you've come to the right place.
If you're looking for an interesting world or story which is not being actively bent to the above stated purpose, you may consider looking elsewhere. Reading this takes some dedication (or at least a compulsive stubbornness). The chapters could use a twice-over to correct mistyped words, missing words, and misplaced punctuation; the action scenes feel rushed and a little disjointed; and the smut scenes, the center of this work, are a bit redundant in how they're written.
But even if it's just the same scene with different actors, last night that scene was the itch. And I... er, it scratched it.
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To be honest, this novel is pretty good. We see our MC going ups and downs that converts in character growth only for her to go back to her old ways. She is struggling to change herself, the destiny of her race and more. For this a lot of things will happen that can make one frustrated yet expectant of her progress.
This is not a major spoiler so you can read and it won't affect much your reading experience, but, if you want to go completely "virgin" in this wonderful novel don't read:
The thing that can get to your nerves the most is that she is not using the system all she can. She is afraid of being dependent of it because her nature is to find how everything works to each detail. So what we end with? A MC that is a genius yet this intelligence comes biting her back in ways that I have never seen to be honest. Moreover, her previous life way of thinking makes her do a lot of mistakes which is making her go back to her martyr ways even if she is not aware.
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Great fun read full of rather decent smut that scratches my itch for chain combos... to put it in nicer words. Insatiable is a light way of describing the MC's libido and personality. They're thirsty for knowledge, experiences, fun times, and general love life. It's not exactly a comedy but it's still funny sometimes. It's mostly just good vibes with a decent approach to it's depictions of love and it's many forms that manifests via MC's harem. Lots of s/m characters and plays, but there's a decent mix of other kinks to keep it from devolving into bdsm orgies. Seems the MC is a very effective magnet for kinky people.
Will warn there being mild ntr, most are just open relationships looking for strong babies. One heavy one
but it's almost immediately somewhat justified? Then later completely so?
Not much to hate, but so much to love it's hard to stop reading! It's too bad I've got an extreme habit for holding back from reading up to date to avoid being left on a cliffhanger. I'll eventually come back when there's a healthy backlog once more!
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Lets start by saying I quite like the novel, the smut is decent albeit a bit repetitive. The story is quite light and mostly smut.
Then the current demon empire arc started and it all got a bit too serious for me. The policital maneuvering basically pushes everything else away to the point where its no longer the smutty story we started with.
Not to mention that is doesn't make sense that she is funding the entire embassy by herself... Then has people sent over to help without any extra funds or assistance... While the whole war effort is supposed to be teetering on her succesful negotiations?
Smut is decent, scenes are descriptive and have quite a few flavours, just don't expect much in the form of romance or relationship building. There's also multiple rape scenes which might turn you away.
The "Doorknocker" also got old really fast. It made sense as a one time joke but to keep it going the whole story and repeat it over and over and over just breaks immersion in my opinion.
Then the system... It's mentioned maybe 10 times total and used even less... Which is a massive shame as it's in the bloody title. It's hardly relevant to the point where the story might have been better off without it. Then when it is used it comes down to "I'll save x till later" which is immensely unsatisfying.
My final gripe is that our protagonist is meant to be a genius. Then the novel only uses that as a negative with MC constantly zoning out and having inner monologues that last hours? Where is the sharp wit and the 4d chess?
Long story short, smut is solid the rest only keeps the story going till the next smut scene.
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Absolutely loving it just turn of the brain and enjoy the Futa it's honestly not a bad world/story and the R-18 scenes are frequent and rather well done for what it is solid 5/5 if you turn of your brain and just read to enjoy a solid 3.5-4/5 if you use your brain
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