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Listen up, anyone still out there!Feb 13, 2022
Chapter 22Nov 4, 2021
Chapter 21Oct 15, 2021
Chapter 20Sep 15, 2021
Author update (conflicted and indecisive teenager here)Sep 8, 2021
Chapter 19Aug 12, 2021
Chapter 18Jul 26, 2021
Chapter 17Jul 15, 2021
Chapter 16Jul 3, 2021
Chapter 15Jun 30, 2021
Chapter 14Jun 21, 2021
Chapter 13Jun 14, 2021
Chapter 12Jun 9, 2021
Chapter 11May 29, 2021
Chapter 10May 23, 2021

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Builder

Status: chapter 1

Jun 11, 2021

I like the original, this is a placeholder to see how this fanfic goes.

Author, Just keep writing, and make sure to FINISH, however that happens, whether with the death of the MC or what. Just finish it.

You're awesome for picking up your pen and writing.

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morgue

Status: c22

Oct 12, 2021

Really well thought-out alternate universe version of the light novel. In this, the original Harold is still present when the isekai'd protagonist Kazuki 'wakes up' in his body. The first chapter does a good job of portraying the confusion of suddenly having two contrasting memories/personalities, and it's nice to see how the abrupt wake-up call affects Harold (for the better). The values dissonance between the two is well-done and doesn't feel forced, and the two main characters have a fun sibling dynamic.

Honestly, some of the plot points and interpersonal relationships between the characters are handled better in this than in the original, so even if you haven't read the LN this is based off of I would still suggest it.

This is a very solid 5/5 stars for me. In the interest of full disclosure, this account was made specifically because of this story and my desire to review/comment on it. I won't claim it's perfect, but the author is making no money off of it and as far as I know they don't have an editor. I look forward to what they have in store for us in future chapters!

Edit: This work is, and likely will remain, unfinished, though the author does explain what they had planned for future chapters. It is absolutely still worth the read! Much as I would have loved to see how the plans they had played out in full, it's understandable that they want to focus on original projects. I wish them all the best in future endeavors!

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K4ZUYA

Status: c14

Jun 25, 2021

I agreed with the first review

PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD FINISH THIS STORY, WHATEVER THE ROUTE YOU CHOOSE

BUT AT LEAST FINISH IT PLEASE I'M BEGGING YOU

edit: I totally love how you did all of the plot, is much better in my opinion, cause 2 soul in 1 body I've been liking this kind of plot, and then I'm just asking you begging you please make Erika useful, not to be like a certain pink haired girl

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