In her previous life, she is a man. Now, born as a woman. She ran away from reality and act like a little boy in her early childhood. Leaving a masculine image that makes you forget she is a girl. But as time go by, she witnesses her own twin sister become a splendid beautiful little girl. She began to become jealous of her own sister and remember her dream before regaining her previous life memory. She then grows her hair as a start for her long journey to femininity.
She is emotionally unstable. She easily gets angry, happy, sad, and excited. She likes to pretend to be dense in relationships and act ignorant to what happens. She also didn't know she has supernatural power until recently.
She is classified as high ranking member of Esper association after the catalyst incident that reveals the existence of dimensional crack and esper to the public.
Maiden name: Takahashi Aira.
Mother of Miyazaki Twins. She is self-proclaimed forever 17 years old. her appearance closely resembles her twin daughters. Sometimes people mistake her and her twin daughters are tripled when going out.
Despite being a mother, she is Eccentric in personality and true to her own word is 17 at heart. She is the only ordinary person without power in Miyazaki's household.
Father of Miyazaki twin sister. A yet to be explored characters. At least currently that is the case. But Aria and Irana always imply that he is an unreliable father to had. He has a supernatural power too but has yet to be revealed what is it. But by analyzing Aria's power that seemingly copies the power she has encountered before. Is likely Miyazaki Takeru's power is Psychokinesis.
She is Aria and Irana's childhood friend... She is a nerdy four eyes girl, that is how she usually looks in a school. In Actualltyy She is a very beautiful girl that every teenage boy will go crazy just by looking at. She has low self-esteem hence why she keeps her nerdy appearance. Aria occasionally urges her to drop her nerdy appearance, but she only thought Aria is teasing her. She has a secret crush on Aria but upon learning Aria is a woman, her dream shatter and so does her first love. Even so, she still has lingering feelings for Aria because Aria keeps teasing her none stop, although unintentionally.
She has power that can teleport herself to a place with a fixed coordinate and place she has been marking. She can teleport up to five people. Although she is a noncombative member of the Esper Association, her ability makes her become a high-ranking member. Especially after the catalyst incident.
One of Aria's followers... he is a cute little boy that is so huggable and pretty much prey to the wild Onee-san in the neighborhood. Even Aria who is a former man pretty much affirms his shota appearance. But as Aria once said, he will be a cute little brother if not for his rotten personality.
Is currently unknown if he has supernatural power. But in the catalyst incident, he is somewhat being implied to have some sort of power. He is one of the founding members of the naughty boy's gang that vows loyalty to Aria. And also one of the people who know Aria's power prior to the catalyst incident.
Aria's new friends, as well as the princess of the Minami Family. She always has a bodyguard on her side that called themself a royal guard. The royal guard once has a clash with the naughty boys for some reason that is even now never being explained. Although Minami Kotori apologize to Aria and say it was her fault, is still too vague to draw a conclusion on what actually happened.
Minami Kotori is an ordinary person with no supernatural power. Although she's giving a strong Ojou-sama vibe, she actually a crybaby and shy toward strangers. But Irana seems to have a strong suspicion of Kotori.
Weird upperclassmen... Being mistaken as chunibyou by Aria. But in fact, she is just an eccentric arrogant esper with Pyrokinesis. She's once being interrogated by Irana and Viola and admitted that she's on a mission to capture Aria. She is a foul-mouthed woman that says whatever comes to mind.
She is Syena Fiolera Childhood friend. Ariana dedicated herself to making Syena happy. Hence the reason she's accepting the mission from the mysterious secret organization that promises her that they can save Syena.
She is a member of the Fiolera Family... or to be exact she is the illegitimate member of the Fiolera family. Her mother is once a princess of Fiolera but decided to run away and be with the man she love. Eventually, she gave birth to Syena and be a happy family ever after...that is how Syena longs for. But fate says it differently and one night, everything suddenly goes wrong. Syena becomes an orphan on that night.
Eventually, The Fiolera found their princess's whereabouts but unfortunately is already too late as Syena's mother already gone. But they found out their princess have a daughter and decided to take Syena into the Fiolera. Syena's life in the Fiolera is treated as an outcast, eventually, they just didn't want to care much for her and just send her toTsukuru Academy. There she will live in a dorm, away from Fiolera Mansion.
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- V3ーChapter 89Mar 26, 2024
- V3ーChapter 88Jan 13, 2024
- V3ーExChapter 57Jan 3, 2024
- V3ーChapter 87Jan 1, 2024
- V3ーExChapter 56Feb 18, 2023
- V3ーChapter 86Sep 7, 2022
- V3ーChapter 85Aug 21, 2022
- V3ーChapter 84Aug 19, 2022
- V3ーChapter 83Aug 14, 2022
- V3ーChapter 82Aug 12, 2022
- V3ーChapter 81Aug 10, 2022
- V3ーPrologueAug 8, 2022
- AfterWordMay 28, 2022
- V2ーEpilogueMay 28, 2022
- V2ーChapter 80May 26, 2022
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Genre Shifts/Flips/Gaps/Whatever are generally something one can not simply do well and easily so. As much as something 'dark' could enhance something 'cute', it is more than likely that 'ruin' is the actual effect. (One can however easily use something cute to make something darker.)
Here we are supposed to have a 'cute' (oblivious) genderbent protagonist and the Slice of Life antics which clash severely with the pseudo-philosophical esper action or rather what appears to be:
cthulhu-esque existential horror since there are apparently plenty of whimsical god-like individuals
I stopped reading at that point especially since such a genre or anything similar that juggles with 'creative concepts' gets far more ruined by bad grammar than SoL is... and the grammar sure is a true eldritch horror during the not-cute parts.
Some want to read, some want to infer whatever the author is intending to write and I, well, I am in the prior camp. I ain't making a spreadsheet about which chapter belongs where chronically.
I am also not entirely sure if cleaning up the grammar will just solve everything since apart from the genre gap working against the 'cuteness', I hazard to say that both are too fast paced/lack detail.
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This story has great potential but its a big mess. It started off fine in the first few chapters but then the author decided to turn this into an Anthology of some kind. Every other chapter is about a different event or story taking place either in a different time or a different place. 90% of the time I don't know what is going on or more like I don't know what the canon story is. The author keeps making these chapters about a bunch of different events that seem to be tied to the main story to give context or details to the backstory to the main cast but its very poorly written. I'm not going to lie I don't know what what or where the current story is supposed to be. The main character and cast seem to be in a different place doing something different every chapter.
Author you need to organize and edit your story massively. I don't have much of an opinion on the grammar or details for now because the mess of the story distracts from any other con like characters and such.
Final thoughts? The author is biting off more then he can chew because he is trying to add every genre like Espers/Magic/Gods/Isekai/Yuri/Gender-Bender/School-life/Monsters and a bunch of other crap but fails spectacularly. You should read something like Magical Girl Aki for a Similar novel but much better. There is also the novel "I'm bored so I decided to create my own secret organization" if your more into the Esper/Secret Organization type of stuff like the To Aru Series.
P.S: The characters are not much better. This review would be far to long if I have to go into detail on everything but for short, the characters and the MC in particular are in as much a mess as the rest of the story.
P.S.S: I would like to repeat that this story needs a MASSIVE Edit. You have a good idea for your story but its written badly and the execution is bad. You should truly read Magical Girl Aki because this story is very similar to that one but written much better. You can get an idea of how to write your story better from that.
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This story has great potential but it was ruined by grammatical mistakes and writing mistakes. In scribblehub, there aren't much actually interesting modern fantasy. The only one that actually caught my interest was Magical Girl Aki's Secret and all the other ones failed miserably due to one reason or another. This is one of those.
1: Grammatical mistakes
The grammar in this story is unbearable. It is so bad that sometimes, it's barely readable. I really don't know why the author didn't hire an editor if they could afford an illustrator.
2: Writing choices
Some bad writing choices were visible here and there. Like a brief mention of a smut scene in chapter 2 or 3 between MC and her imouto but didn't write the actual smut nor does it have any impact on the plot. Please, when you write something, don't write it if it doesn't serve any purpose. Another example: there is a scene where MC and another girl were selected to clean the toilet. The description of how dirty the toilet was is waaaaay too short. You need to be able to determine what part to write in detail and what part to omit.
3: Plot holes
There are plot holes in the story. If you look for them, you will find them. I won't write them down in detail here tho, if you want, look for them yourself.
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It's a great novel I am really happy to come by and see this novel in my recommendations and also please take care of yourself And take a rest hope you feel better after!
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This was a very good series. The grammatical problems have been mentioned so many times by others, so no need to repeat that. However, I did have a problem with the overall structure of the story. I feel like the story suddenly got way too big.
Like dealing with criminal orgs to directly god
It is important to keep it gradual. If a slice of life story suddenly starts talking about very serious issue it becomes difficult to digest and understand. It is not to say that it shouldn't be done but rather there should be enough buildup.
For instance, as mentioned in the spoiler above, there are many stories that suddenly take a different turn altogether. For instance, in That time I got reincarnated as a slime, when Rimuru becomes a demon lord was very different as someone who didn't kill any humans till date and wanted to exist in harmony with them, ended up killing thousands of people in an instant. This scene definitely differed from the original slice of life, no-consequence, forgiving vibe that was their before. However, it had a lot of foreshadowing in fact, months before this event even took place.
Similarly, we should have some foreshadowing, some inkling that the story is not as grounded as it seems and slowly build up to give us that drastic change.
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Nice 👍... hope there will be more pov for irana and more misunderstandings...
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