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Former Crown Prince favors the Villainess
Former Crown Prince favors the Villainess
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The mood of the entire Empire of Zemira changed overnight with the death of the Empress, Helena Zemira.

It was even worse for her son the Crown Prince, Arthur Zemira. When things proved to be difficult, the Emperor brought in his mistress, a princess of a fallen kingdom. With her, arrived 2 more members. A son and daughter all kept as a secret to the whole of the Empire.

Things changed, and Arthur's rage towards his father was at its peak. When asked to leave his title as the Crown Prince, he gladly accepts...for it's not something he wished to have.

"You want my position? Sure, I'll let you have it, only if you fulfill my conditions."

With confidence, Arthur stood up against his father with his strange but meaningful conditions.

Just what could those conditions be?

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      Ad10000
      Status: c7

      Author nim,

      Thanks for rewriting this wonderful story. 

      Can you please add something more in plot a little like, he never forgive them never. 

      But even if he do, he should never forgive him & his new family like some people do (he will be in a neutral relationship with them. No loving no caring). 

      And don't make him friendly with his step mom & son that is like saying you really are hopeless person and you have actually no moral or mind whatsoever. I mean goddamn him step brother is sh*t for doing all he did. 

      If he really like his brother (MC) why not just give his position to him. It is like those sluts or man-sluts that f**k anyone but they still love & the reason is why they didn't tell you is because they love. 

      If he is being friendly with them than I will be stop reading this. 

      Because it will be like sh*t 

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      Aheartofehs
      Status: chapter – 17

      This story was one of the few stories with a promising synopsis that pulled me into reading on ScribbleHub. When I first saw it, I was not interested in reading. But now with more time to read, my mind goes back to this story so I began to read it.

      I did not read the original but liked this rewrite's worldbuilding and enjoyed how it was told to the reader gradually and smoothly instead of an info-dump. However it did had a few flaws. The MC started as a 10 year old, but the personality ranged from way too calm and rational for a 10 year old's mindset given the situation to an angry teenager with capabilities more like something a teenager might do in their late teens or so. Its only after the time-skip that the personality seems to fit more with the mc's current age in the story. 

      However it is a story with some good promise. It flows nice, so it doesn't give an obvious infodump so that's a plus. It also builds the characters up a bit. It was most interesting how it connected modern world technology when it originally gave a medieval fantasy vibe. Story stopped just when it was getting more interesting with how the MC finally was beginning to execute his plans. Otherwise, would've continued reading. 

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      CasualDarkSouls77
      Status: chapter – 6

      To those who read the original: It is a more emotional, slightly slower paced version of the original (and MC is less OP).

      I think it is significantly better.  The relationships feel much MUCH better. (Slowly calming down feels more human than just accepting it and forgiving Will and his mom)   Contrary to the previous review I would prefer Arthur have a good relationship with Diana and a positive respectful relationship with William and neutral respectful with his step-mom. (His 'father' deserves all of his hate)

      HOWEVER! You are the author and you should do what you want and I would read such a well thought out story regardless.

      Please keep up the good work, you are doing great!

      Some nit picking for you:

       You had his mother unsure about an afterlife, but then had a spirit basically confirm it so she should have known. Changing that to being unsure of the details instead would help.

      Your world is has both magic and tech.  You need to consider the implications of this, why would we have to detect cell phones if people can cast detection magic? I think you were implying that magic is combat only, but that is not clear. 

      I loved how you made his mom be clever enough to hide her will so Arthur can find it. However, him listening to a recording of his Mom talking seems to imply he has more records of his mom. Was a USB in the package he got?

      Finally you should probably clarify why William is supported so much.  Yes the Emperor supports him and the other dukes sorta like him (and betray Art's mom).  But something like the wealthy aristocracy his mother offended want him out would balance the fields a bit.  Because right now it is a unknown boy with a ex-princess of a dead line against the known crown prince with a mother loved by quite a bit of the common-folk.

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