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Aperio had been a slave for as long as she could remember. She toiled away in the palace of her masters, her body forced to obey, her mind no longer caring that she did. Her only joy was the small inconveniences an error in her work could bring, the resulting punishment a small price to pay. When the news came she was to be sacrificed in a grand ritual, she welcomed it—for most, death was a cause for grief and mourning, but for Aperio, it was her only way out.

However, during the final stages, something went wrong. Fate intervened, and Aperio found herself in a world she no longer knew, with powers beyond her wildest dreams. No longer a slave to the Empire, she set out to find her place in the world, and enjoy true freedom for the first time in her life.

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This story will have a few different kinds of chapters that are going to be posted:

[Arc title - Chapter X: Chapter Name] These will follow Aperio directly and tell her story.

[Side Story - Story POV X: Story Name] These tell stories that either impact the whole world, are a consequence of Aperio’s actions or as a way to introduce a new character/organization/place.

[Lore - Legends X: Legend Name] These will be small in-universe lore posts that are tangentially relevant to the current story (be it main arc or sidestory). Most will be in the form of an entry in the ‘Book of Legends’.

I will try to post one real chapters – so either the current arc or a side story – every week. Legends will be posted when they are relevant but will not impact regular releases.

Please do keep in mind that this story is a training exercise for me, if you have any critique that extends past ‘it’s garbage’ I would love to hear it.

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      New Sintex
      Status: c9
      May 22, 2020

      Being honest with this review ok. 

      Let's start by talking about some little things that I have difficult to understand in the beginning.

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      What's up with all these excuses in the first few chapters? 

      Starve to dead?

      Can't use her power in the real world as she used in the void????

      Let me see if I get this right, and sry I'm not English so maybe I'm getting this all wrong but you describe a character that is begging to be killed to not suffer anymore right? after that, she somehow ascends to divinity or at least something close to that. but she didn't know that. Okei let's keep going here. At that time she knows a few things, she can fly and her scars disappear. sound good. soo to not starve she decides to find a way out. Well Ok is not like she wanted to die in the first place right? Good let's continue. She finds a way to leave but oopsie! looks like the place she founds out, is a place that looks like the prison she knew in the empire (kingdom IDR) she suicides... What to do now?? Well, she jumps in it boy, she willingly goes to a place where she preferred to took her life other than be in the void... 200IQ. You know the best part is she could choose another way, she knew that was not the only way out, but she was afraid that if she chose wrong she could find herself in an ocean. RLLY?? look by the way you write this main character it just doesn't make sense her choices. 

      The more I read the story, the more I see excuses and you actually nurf your character._. anyway sorry for my awful English and the waste of your time.

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      New Sky3Fall
      Status: sacrifice – chapter 1: the truest form of freedom
      May 9, 2020

      I’ll write a more complete review later as I am currently not in a state to do so, but I just wanted to praise the character development of this story. Not many stories with a powerful main character manage to retain the character’s sense of both strength and reality, and this story does that perfectly. Nobody is perfect, and having that be a source of the main character’s struggle is so incredibly well done. 

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      tantallous
      Status: advent – chapter 39: mistakes
      Jan 26, 2020

      When I started this, I wasn't sure what to think.  It seemed interesting enough, but it was very different from most stories I've read. I am very glad I stuck with it because right now it is one of my favorite stories on this site.  At first I was put off by the MC being ignorant of the world and her abilities, while at the same time being incredibly powerful, but over time I realized how brilliant it was.  Despite her power (or perhaps because of it) she is no more infallible than any of us, which helps relate to the MC.  Making mistakes and learning from them is an important part of growing, and while the MC starts "grown" she is essentially a toddler that has been handed a death ray and been told they can go play.  As the story progresses she learns and grows and as a reader I get to experience the process.

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      SovietWeeb
      Status: sacrifice – chapter 24: prelude to conflict
      Nov 29, 2019

      The story is fun and interesting. The idea is pretty interesting and the story does manage to portray it well in my opinion.

      I think it's fairly fun to watch the MC deal with the weird situation they find themselves in. The character cast if pretty interesting. My favorite besides the MC would be the hotblooded Paladin/Knight.

      The story is good and I'd say that it's worth a read. 

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      delta33
      Status: sacrifice – chapter 24: prelude to conflict
      Nov 27, 2019

      One of the best fantasy series I have read in the last decade.

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      skilodracus
      Status: advent – chapter 46: the dungeon’s entrance
      Feb 24, 2020

      With well developed characters, an interesting premise and high quality of writing, this is one of the best fantasy stories on Scribblehub. 

      The beginning of the story is a little slow while also anxiety inducing as Aperio tries to figure out what is going on with herself and her powers. As the reader, its hard to get a grasp on her personality, so some of the decisions and actions she makes can be a little frustrating. However, as the story develops so does Aperio, and she turns into a fascinating character with a lot of depth.  She is a character that has suffered a lot of abuse, but the author handles it in a manner that is mature and respectful, adding to her character and affecting her motivations in profound ways.

      The slow pace of the story also means we can follow her journey with an intimate understanding of her thoughts as she uncovers the mysteries of her identity. So far the story has touched only a little bit on the side characters, but they also making for interesting personalities that sometimes clash with Aperio's. The slow pace also keeps the reader engaged, as it is well written and does not ever divert from the story or characters. Each chapter serves a purpose, so that when you're finished you're always left craving for more. 

      Despite the slow start, I really love this story so far and it has a huge amount of potential. I can't wait to see where the author takes it next. 

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      CasualCultist
      Status: advent – chapter 42: harsh lessons
      Feb 10, 2020

      It's really good and you should read it

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