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At the time of writing, the author has clearly forgotten to put the obligatory "English is not my main language" alert in the description. This is accompanied by how the author most likely does not have eyes, as the formatting is absolutely evil, and neither will you as you would have gouge out your own from staring at the text for too long. The premise is decent for something posted on scribblehub. If you can make it past the grammar and the eye bending formatting, you might enjoy this.
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Certainly, it has potential. Main problem I feel with these early chapters is the lack of descriptiveness. One great example is that we're given a list of names but no idea of who's who beyond that. MC doesn't really narrate, as much as it's essentially one long conversation.
It's understandable, as the author themselves has admitted to only having a basic level of understanding English. It's very clear however that the author is working around it, and it will improve as the author does.
Innital rating: 4.0/5
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simply great because it's made by someone else, and its an original.
very nice plot but I cant tell which ones which.
but great nonetheless, great plot, MC very good, and isn't stupid nor dense.
hope that you make a comic of this in the future years.
and soon maybe an anime, looking forward to the story.
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