It's well-written and also has a pretty good take on the system being the protagonist. My only problem with it is the hiatus without a proper explanation, but everything else's good.
You already know what you are in for when reading the synopsis: Cultivation story with THE system creating a body and starting cultivation.
Easy access to all techniques and theory is a given with that background. And as is the case with most cultivation stories the plot armor is ever present in terms of encounters. Like, first person that our MC meets is the love interest. First shopping trip results in a perfect item or two for our MC, oh wonder.
No, normally those would all be reasons for me not reading such a story, BUT despite all the usual stuff there are a few key points making this an enjoyable read for me.
For one all the cultivation theory we usually have to endure is not present here. No convoluted mess of terms you have to keep in mind like with many other cultivation stories. As such the focus is more on the MC, some cute moments, the mystery around the MC's origin, and some face slapping here and there (synopsis warned you).
Now, you will find some grammatical errors here and there and some sentences will make you question what exactly the author wanted to tell us, but all in all it didn't impact my enjoyment of the story.
The style is rather simple, you will not find some strange flowery descriptions from chinese novels.
A quite fascinating story. I read the first 20 chapters in one afternoon and I want to continue, it is a pity that there are no more chapters at the moment.
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It's well-written and also has a pretty good take on the system being the protagonist. My only problem with it is the hiatus without a proper explanation, but everything else's good.
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Ridiculous but enjoyable!
You already know what you are in for when reading the synopsis: Cultivation story with THE system creating a body and starting cultivation.
Easy access to all techniques and theory is a given with that background. And as is the case with most cultivation stories the plot armor is ever present in terms of encounters. Like, first person that our MC meets is the love interest. First shopping trip results in a perfect item or two for our MC, oh wonder.
No, normally those would all be reasons for me not reading such a story, BUT despite all the usual stuff there are a few key points making this an enjoyable read for me.
For one all the cultivation theory we usually have to endure is not present here. No convoluted mess of terms you have to keep in mind like with many other cultivation stories. As such the focus is more on the MC, some cute moments, the mystery around the MC's origin, and some face slapping here and there (synopsis warned you).
Now, you will find some grammatical errors here and there and some sentences will make you question what exactly the author wanted to tell us, but all in all it didn't impact my enjoyment of the story.
The style is rather simple, you will not find some strange flowery descriptions from chinese novels.
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A quite fascinating story. I read the first 20 chapters in one afternoon and I want to continue, it is a pity that there are no more chapters at the moment.
Thanks to the Author for posting the story.
I hope to continue enjoying new chapters.
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