Just taking a guess, but English is probably not the first language of the author, which would make this fairly decent for an attempt at a novel. Dialogue is a bit stiff because almost no one would speak without contracting some common words and phrasings. Interactions feel extremely contrived and unnatural, most of them happening because 'coincidence' which is plot armor heavy. No real details are given aside from something artificial that we have to take on faith as the author tells you a person is some way instead of showing you that they are a certain way.
The grammar is rough, really rough. It's not unreadable, but it is very messy and often times the tenses are mixed. I'm reading nothing but generic Chinese/Asian Entitled Male CEO attracted to random OP Female MC so far, and it's proving to be less than great because of the bare-bones way things are presented and executed. What could be a potentially exciting scene is usually glossed over by an almost summary like reaction piece that is done before the paragraph is over. That seems to be a recurring issue, as each chapter handles events as almost a summary and glosses over the details that could have allowed the story to shine (which is how most of this genre makes a name for itself) and instead just goes for the generic route.
I'm expecting it to eventually get to something different, but thus far it's been nothing new.
Look for any Female lead OP MC Chinese novel and you'll see what I'm talking about.
Story is good at the start, but author has dragged it on. There is little character development. All the FL does is prance around and try to hide her identity from the 50 male leads chasing her.
The title was very misleading, I had assumed that the “CEO” was the main male lead (and who she’d end up with) but it turns out this is a full blown (reverse) harem.
The romance is lacking, there’s nothing romantic about this novel, because many of the “romantic” parts are just summaries of this and that. It felt like I was reading a summary of someone’s actions/point of view. (E.g. “She saw him, standing 180cm, his physique was toned”).
Also, the FL doesn’t really do anything with any of her male leads. There’s no real romance, just her toying with them, (as expected, because she has to hide her “real” identity), but it’s very unsatisfying as a reader :/, I wish the author hadn’t made everything so ambiguous. I mean we are 230 chapters into the novel and the plots still missing.
I would give this 1 star but I applaud the author for trying her best.
Please include a harem tag, I thought that the main relationship would be monogamous, but I was wrong.
A listless man devoid of emotion, assassinated in his first life for reasons unknown to him, finds himself back in his first year of high school only to encounter a girl whose sweet whispers in his ear resembles the voice he heard on the verge of
Just taking a guess, but English is probably not the first language of the author, which would make this fairly decent for an attempt at a novel. Dialogue is a bit stiff because almost no one would speak without contracting some common words and phrasings. Interactions feel extremely contrived and unnatural, most of them happening because 'coincidence' which is plot armor heavy. No real details are given aside from something artificial that we have to take on faith as the author tells you a person is some way instead of showing you that they are a certain way.
The grammar is rough, really rough. It's not unreadable, but it is very messy and often times the tenses are mixed. I'm reading nothing but generic Chinese/Asian Entitled Male CEO attracted to random OP Female MC so far, and it's proving to be less than great because of the bare-bones way things are presented and executed. What could be a potentially exciting scene is usually glossed over by an almost summary like reaction piece that is done before the paragraph is over. That seems to be a recurring issue, as each chapter handles events as almost a summary and glosses over the details that could have allowed the story to shine (which is how most of this genre makes a name for itself) and instead just goes for the generic route.
I'm expecting it to eventually get to something different, but thus far it's been nothing new.
Look for any Female lead OP MC Chinese novel and you'll see what I'm talking about.
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Dropped.
Story is good at the start, but author has dragged it on. There is little character development. All the FL does is prance around and try to hide her identity from the 50 male leads chasing her.
The title was very misleading, I had assumed that the “CEO” was the main male lead (and who she’d end up with) but it turns out this is a full blown (reverse) harem.
The romance is lacking, there’s nothing romantic about this novel, because many of the “romantic” parts are just summaries of this and that. It felt like I was reading a summary of someone’s actions/point of view. (E.g. “She saw him, standing 180cm, his physique was toned”).
Also, the FL doesn’t really do anything with any of her male leads. There’s no real romance, just her toying with them, (as expected, because she has to hide her “real” identity), but it’s very unsatisfying as a reader :/, I wish the author hadn’t made everything so ambiguous. I mean we are 230 chapters into the novel and the plots still missing.
I would give this 1 star but I applaud the author for trying her best.
Please include a harem tag, I thought that the main relationship would be monogamous, but I was wrong.
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Love this interesting story with lot of handsome Ceos running and pampering beautiful cute little bunny with green eyes.
Every chapter has lots of twist and turns... Surely don't know which ceo that we want our little bunny to end up at the end.
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