Bullying has become the norm of many high schools nowadays, where not even looks matter for becoming the victim. The same has been the case with Aya Tsukuyomi, a gorgeous girl of 15, who receives hellish torment from her classmates. Though one day, a young and brave boy Hisashi Kurogane transfers to her class and meets her, both unaware that they will change each other’s lives forever. But he is astonished when he realizes she is a bullied loner contrary to her beauty. He has an unending desire to help her, but at first ignores for he thought it might ruin his image towards the teachers and students if he caused a ruckus on his very first day. Though, as he experienced other’s hideous behaviour towards her first-hand, pitied her and tries his best to cheer her up.
On that day, an incident that had brought the depressed Aya Tsukuyomi on the doorstep of heaven, was saved by Hisashi Kurogane, somehow. Ever since, being grateful for saving her, she wishes to be with him till her last breath. And even he, after experiencing and listening from her own voice the grievous situation of her life, pledged to be by her side and protect her, for no one else was there to support her.
‘The Conflagration of Tormented Wizards’ follows the journey of Hisashi and Aya as their lives change forever due to an unforeseen incident, when they get dragged into a world full of magic powers and settle in their new life as a sorcerer. Life seemed peaceful there at first, but a major turning-point came; what awaited them was something they had never seen or heard in their entire life.
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[This is my first-ever novel, written to bring about the awareness of sibling abuse and school bullying "peer abuse", blended with a full-fledged fantasy-action plot and sweet and passionate romance]
I am hooked to the story! It has certainly been well written, if not best and the story itself is really interesting. This review might not have presented enough info, but I recommend this story and it definitely deserves a read.
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It started out fairly good, but the fourth chapter is where I immediately dropped it. I cannot really explain why without somewhat spoiling it, but it seems extremely unnecessary and disturbing.
The MC is supposedly "Overpowered" and yet he cannot prevent the FMC from getting groped right in front of him. The fourth chapter has three bullies that gang up on the MC and FMC, but the FMC gets snatched by one of the bullies. After being snatched away from the MC that is supposedly extremely strong and fast (as shown in previous chapters) the MC waits for a "perfect timing" to kick the bully away. The story proceeds to state that it looked like the MC "traveled faster than light" to kick the dude groping the FMC. Now tell me how he wouldn't be able to prevent the groping altogether if he was "faster than light." The groping seemed extremely unnecessary and just made the MC look very underpowered. Unless of course the MC enjoyed watching the FMC get groped by some random dudes right in front of him, that's my best guess.
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The grammar and language use feel like its a bad japanese to english translation. The language used is awkward, limited and tilted. Bad sentence structure abandance of comas (usualy rare in english, usual in non native english to japanese fan translations). Whatever the quality of the story it comes to a halt if the grammar is awful.
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