I am hooked to the story! It has certainly been well written, if not best and the story itself is really interesting. This review might not have presented enough info, but I recommend this story and it definitely deserves a read.
It started out fairly good, but the fourth chapter is where I immediately dropped it. I cannot really explain why without somewhat spoiling it, but it seems extremely unnecessary and disturbing.
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The MC is supposedly "Overpowered" and yet he cannot prevent the FMC from getting groped right in front of him. The fourth chapter has three bullies that gang up on the MC and FMC, but the FMC gets snatched by one of the bullies. After being snatched away from the MC that is supposedly extremely strong and fast (as shown in previous chapters) the MC waits for a "perfect timing" to kick the bully away. The story proceeds to state that it looked like the MC "traveled faster than light" to kick the dude groping the FMC. Now tell me how he wouldn't be able to prevent the groping altogether if he was "faster than light." The groping seemed extremely unnecessary and just made the MC look very underpowered. Unless of course the MC enjoyed watching the FMC get groped by some random dudes right in front of him, that's my best guess.
The grammar and language use feel like its a bad japanese to english translation. The language used is awkward, limited and tilted. Bad sentence structure abandance of comas (usualy rare in english, usual in non native english to japanese fan translations). Whatever the quality of the story it comes to a halt if the grammar is awful.
I am hooked to the story! It has certainly been well written, if not best and the story itself is really interesting. This review might not have presented enough info, but I recommend this story and it definitely deserves a read.
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It started out fairly good, but the fourth chapter is where I immediately dropped it. I cannot really explain why without somewhat spoiling it, but it seems extremely unnecessary and disturbing.
The MC is supposedly "Overpowered" and yet he cannot prevent the FMC from getting groped right in front of him. The fourth chapter has three bullies that gang up on the MC and FMC, but the FMC gets snatched by one of the bullies. After being snatched away from the MC that is supposedly extremely strong and fast (as shown in previous chapters) the MC waits for a "perfect timing" to kick the bully away. The story proceeds to state that it looked like the MC "traveled faster than light" to kick the dude groping the FMC. Now tell me how he wouldn't be able to prevent the groping altogether if he was "faster than light." The groping seemed extremely unnecessary and just made the MC look very underpowered. Unless of course the MC enjoyed watching the FMC get groped by some random dudes right in front of him, that's my best guess.
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The grammar and language use feel like its a bad japanese to english translation. The language used is awkward, limited and tilted. Bad sentence structure abandance of comas (usualy rare in english, usual in non native english to japanese fan translations). Whatever the quality of the story it comes to a halt if the grammar is awful.
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