Who doesn't like fantasy? Worlds full of interesting and new things that baffle the mind of anyone. Races like elves, dwarfs, and beast peoples, roaming the land, in search of different things that might be banal from them but incredible for others. And if you are someone who comes from an otherworld you will certainly receive a great power, rare equipment, trustworthy companions, or even a harem, while you are tasked to fight the Demon Lord and his army made of monsters, for peace and glory. But have you ever asked this question: What is it like to be on the other side? Follow the story of Steven Torres, who was abducted from his world with his classmates only to be thrown away into a chaotic world as the most hated race. While the hero's job is to fight for justice, he's at least a lot simpler. To survive another day.
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it's a really good concept but currently the wording can be confusing and the story has a very fast pace feel to it it can leave you confused and missing things other than that it's a solid story with decent sized chapters and a good premise.
author should probably work on pacing and overall story progression/ structure cause it can leave people confused.
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I only managed to read this far because I didn't want to believe that something that managed to get trending a few times could be as bad as the first chapter seemed to suggest, so I tried to power through what I believed would be some shaky few first chapters before it got good, but it never got better than how it started. There's such an embarassing amount of errors that this novel honestly looks like a very early draft more than anything, and the story amounts to nothing more than misery porn and a lazily written overpowered protagonist that does whatever the writer thought would be cool in the moment. Would strongly NOT recommend.
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For at least the first few chapters the grammar and spelling seems to be downright abysmal. I also am fairly certain I found a plot hole or two. I did take a peek into newer chapters and although it does seem to be better I could still find quite a few errors. There are also a bunch of edit suggestions (that are accurate) for the early chapters that seem to have been ignored or missed. As of now I'll probable keep readingand may update my review.
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It won’t let me change anything on the review template but please don’t bother reading it’s an amazing premise RUINED by a practically illiterate author with roughly 1/4 the words spelled wrong per chapter and the writer just bouncing sentence to sentence it’s like they were 15 beers and a bag deep trying to type this entire thing it’s awful.
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The story is all over the place with no goals or consistencies. Nothing in this story is taken seriously. The only good part in this story is that the good of madness is really well done so 2 stars.
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This was a decent story at first, but it quickly devolved into spur-of-the-moment misery-fetish, with no rhyme or reason for anything. Some of the story beats were promising, but all of them were abandoned before they amounted to anything actually fulfilling.
At some point, the Main Character stops being a character at all, only a one-dimensional edgelord who does whatever crosses his mind because the author thought it would be hilarious.
At another point in the story the Main Character becomes a god, specifically the god of madness. In this story however, 'Madness' evidently means 'doing whatever the f**k he wants without reason or plan'
The fact I couldn't even remember a single character's name really should be evident of that.
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