This is an amazing story. I've been following it on patreon for a while now and it's both hilarious and intriguing. You've got some stuff to look forward to as this comes out.
RavensDagger only serves the finest stories, after all.
This book is a fine work of art. Literature which any age can enjoy is the best kind, such as Avatar: the last airbender, and the Enchanted Forest Chronicles by Patricia C. Wrede. This fits in nicely as another golden title. The writing is of a quality that you get sucked in, whether dialogue, story flow, or the characters. Very well made, thank you!
4.8 Stars [Round Up] (4.3 Stars, +.5 reread bonus [Rereading the story 3+ times]) (Made at Chapter Afterwards Of Vol 2)
Heart of Dorkness IS.... Great! I've read ready the story start to finish about six times, for no particular reason. For me it just happens to be one of my relax stories. Stories that I can just sit back and enjoy each time I read them. MC and her two friends GF are always fun to read. As they get up to mischief, as they try to do the task they are given. Also MC and her mum are also great together, from watching their relationship form in the side chapters of volume 1, to them being the best mum/daughter duo around, in the rest of the story. The power system is also pretty interesting, I won't get into here. But different elements are based on emotions, there also a little bit LitRPG elements very minor but still important.
Sometimes I'm just blown away by the quality of the writing you can find in webnovels. This is one such example. RavensDagger has quite a way with words, and knows how to keep the story both interesting and engaging. Both Luciana and Valeria are oblivious dorks in the best way.
I have few complaints about the novel, and they're mostly just nitpicking. For example, the 'system' is introduced, classes and skills are explained, and then... forgotten, I guess? It almost seems that the LitRPG elements could just be removed entirely without losing anything. The isekai plot points are also treated as more of an afterthought than anything else. This could certainly be solved if a third volume comes out and we see more of
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Lily. Why was she even isekai'd in the first place? The prologue says she's some sort of chosen one, but for what?
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That's my other complaint (which is more of a wistful yearning, tbh). There's no third volume, and despite what the Afterward says there might never be one. We never learn anything about the situation in the Future-logue. Duke Araujo is never brought up again.
In any case, read this. You won't regret it. Volume 2 does wrap the story up pretty well, there's no setup for another villain or cliffhanger, but you will be left wanting more. It's worth it.
Cutest story ever. Made me cry and laugh so much. Well written, with time-jumps and side-stories that made so much sense. I loved the adventures as much as the past stories. Thank you!
Both Luciana and Valeria are Dorks, they're both lovable.
Monsters are interesting, they're not necessarily evil. Rather they view humans as a source of food and is demonized by other gods because of that and because of rivalry\dislike between gods. It would be interesting to see if they'd demonize lions, snake and other "human eaters" from our world.
I can't give it top grade though, because I know i've read better and more interesting novels.
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This is an amazing story. I've been following it on patreon for a while now and it's both hilarious and intriguing. You've got some stuff to look forward to as this comes out.
RavensDagger only serves the finest stories, after all.
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This book is a fine work of art. Literature which any age can enjoy is the best kind, such as Avatar: the last airbender, and the Enchanted Forest Chronicles by Patricia C. Wrede. This fits in nicely as another golden title. The writing is of a quality that you get sucked in, whether dialogue, story flow, or the characters. Very well made, thank you!
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4.8 Stars [Round Up] (4.3 Stars, +.5 reread bonus [Rereading the story 3+ times])
(Made at Chapter Afterwards Of Vol 2)
Heart of Dorkness IS.... Great! I've read ready the story start to finish about six times, for no particular reason. For me it just happens to be one of my relax stories. Stories that I can just sit back and enjoy each time I read them.
MC and her two friends GF are always fun to read. As they get up to mischief, as they try to do the task they are given. Also MC and her mum are also great together, from watching their relationship form in the side chapters of volume 1, to them being the best mum/daughter duo around, in the rest of the story.
The power system is also pretty interesting, I won't get into here. But different elements are based on emotions, there also a little bit LitRPG elements very minor but still important.
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Lily. Why was she even isekai'd in the first place? The prologue says she's some sort of chosen one, but for what?
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Cutest story ever. Made me cry and laugh so much. Well written, with time-jumps and side-stories that made so much sense. I loved the adventures as much as the past stories. Thank you!
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Amazing story. Very wholesome. Magic system is on the of the best I've ever read.
Hope it comes back one day
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Wholesome and heartwarming. Great story would recommend. ?
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Amazing story. I enjoy it very much.
If the author every get a publish on amazon I will probably buy their book to support their works.
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It's good, not top notch, but good.
Both Luciana and Valeria are Dorks, they're both lovable.
Monsters are interesting, they're not necessarily evil. Rather they view humans as a source of food and is demonized by other gods because of that and because of rivalry\dislike between gods. It would be interesting to see if they'd demonize lions, snake and other "human eaters" from our world.
I can't give it top grade though, because I know i've read better and more interesting novels.
Still it IS a must read, atleast give it a shot.
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