First Jinchuriki of the Nine Tailed Fox, Wife of the First Hokage.
Like Many Uzumaki members, she possesses enormous vitality and bright red hair as a part of her bloodline.
In her prime:
As an Elder, around 14 Years before the year when Naruto would be born:
A gifted prodigy. Graduating from the Konoha Ninja Academy at the age of 10, he entered a Genin team lead by Jiraiya around a year before the latter became famous as one of the Densetsu no Sannin (Legendary Sannin).
Only son of Fusō Uzumaki and Ise, he and his family were caught up as collateral damage during the vicious opening stages of the Second Shinobi World War.
Originally a resident of the Land of Rain, he wanders to escape constant conflict.
Fuzō is trained as a nurse and medic. Though not her homeland, she is a resident of the Land of Rain where she lived in a smaller village with her husband Ise and their son Nagato.
During the Second Shinobi World War, Fuzō and her husband were providing humanitarian aid to the small countries before settling in the Land of Rain.
As a nurse, working alongside her husband to give aid to others in times of war, Fuzō is a very compassionate woman. She loves her family and friends very much, willing to risk her life to help them survive.
An Elder of the Hidden Leaf Village (Konohagakure), student and contemporary of the Second Hokage Tobirama Senju.
He fought during the brutal First Shinobi World War, and was involved in many of Konoha's dealings during the peace between the First and Second World Wars.
Both his father and grandfather died on the battlefield during the Warring States period before the founding of Shinobi Villages, but his Shimura clan was one of the first to ally with the Uchiha and Senju to found Konoha.
His methods and motives are suspect by most everyone...
The Third Hokage of Konohagakure.
He is a disciple of the previous two Hokage and member of Team Tobirama. A genius and natural prodigy as a ninja, he is adept in affinity for all of the basic Nature Type chakra transformations.
In his prime, he is considered as a "God of Shinobi" along with the First Hokage, respected and often liked by all other village leaders internationally.
He is the Sensei who trained Team Hiruzen, later known as the Legendary Sannin, who were his only direct disciples.
Renowned across the shinobi world as "Konoha's White Fang" largely for his accomplishments and demonstrated prowess during the Second Shinobi World War. His fame is on par even the Legendary Sannin, striking fear into the hearts of his enemies.
He is hailed as a genius shinobi for his talents in the ninja arts. He is one of Minato Namikaze's role models and personal heroes.
He possesses the Hatake Clan's Heirloom tantō, the White Light Chakra Sabre. The signature white streak of chakra given off by this blade is in part responsible for his nickname. He utilizes this blade with his clan's signature kenjutsu (sword style), which focuses on distraction, feint, and using the enemy's weapon against them.
He wears a signature white sleeve on his left shoulder emblazoned with the Uzushiogakure crest on it. This is in part due to his clan's heritage and relationship with Uzushiogakure (Hidden Eddy Village).
Wife of Sakumo Hatake and Mother of Kakashi Hatake.
She was born into the Inuzuka clan, in a minor branch family, as a child with weaker health and constitution. She is much quieter and more reserved than the rowdy main families of the Inuzuka clan.
Her sense of smell is extraordinarily good, but she does not have a constitution suited for shinobi work. She makes use of her sense of smell in her cooking, leading her to become an excellent cook.
Kind and caring, she craves a quieter and simpler life than most of her fellow clansmen, who mostly train as shinobi.
She has long brown hair typical of her clan, but combs it into a neat and smooth locks. When she bathes or sleeps, her hair can puff up into more wild and unruly look similar to the rest of her clan. Her eyes are a pale aquamarine color and she stands at about 162 cm tall.
Member of the main family of the Inuzuka Clan.
She is around 10 during the outbreak of the Second Shinobi World war, and trains as a shinobi with her canine companion, Kuromaru. She attended the Konoha Ninja Academy two years after Minato Naimkaze and Kushina Uzumaki's Class.
Rowdy and fierce, she embodies the feral tenacity of her clan.
Tsume as an adult with Kuromaru:
Eventually, his feats in war would earn him the nickname "Wicked Eye Fugaku"
A Jonin from the Uchiha Clan, betrothed and later married to Fugaku Uchiha, settling down as a housewife.
At some point during the Uchiha's internal conflict, she awakened her sharingan which allowed her to attain a mastery of shurikenjutsu and the usage of small arms, which she utilizes heavily during her time as a jonin before retiring. She is around 3 years older than Minato Namikaze and Kushina Uzumaki, having entered the academy 3 years before them.
Mikoto is a very gentle and kind woman, but can also be stern and strict when she needed to be. She loves her family deeply and knows how to help them with their problems. She gives very good advice and has a high respect for her husband and his position.
Famed Jonin of the Uchiha Clan, she is revered as "The Peacebringer" by the Uchiha Clan and much of Konohagakure (Hidden Leaf Village) for ending the Uchiha Clan's recent violent internal power struggles.
Naori is a calm kunoichi who maintained her composure even when fighting a friend and fellow clan member. She is also very kind and selfless, as she tried to save Naka Uchiha by making him accept his fate using a non-lethal method, sacrificing her left eye's sight in the process. Her selflessness and broader perspective allowed her to resist the Curse of Hatred associated with her Clan's Mangekyō Sharingan, allowing her to gain and wield enormous power for the ones she loves.
Naori in her prime:
Her role in the Uchiha Clan's internal turmoil:
She and her close friend, Naka Uchiha, had both awakened their Mangekyō Sharingan, but Naka became obsessed with the use of Izanagi (A reality-altering genjutsu technique). Naka Uchiha entered a power struggle with other prominent Izanagi Users, eventually coming out on top after the death of his fellow clansmen Rai Uchiha and Baru Uchiha.
[Naka slays his kin]:
Naori was determined to save Naka from Izanagi and insanity, and so she ultimately cast Izanami (The counter-part to Izanagi) on him in order to get him to accept his fate.
[Naori Traps Naka in Izanami to save him]:
[Naka Surrenders to Naori]:
[Naori Sacrifices vision in her left eye to complete the Izanami]:
She was successful and as the last Mangekyō users capable of Izanagi and Izanami, they reestablished the status of both as Forbidden jutsu, thus ending the recent Uchiha strife over Izanagi.
One of the Legendary Sannin, distinguished during the Second Shinobi World War.
Granddaughter of Hashirama Senju, the First Hokage.
Tsunade is the foremost medical expert in all of the Land of Fire, and rivals Chiyo of Sunagakure (Hidden Sand Village) for the title of Greatest medical ninjutsu user in the world.
Tsunade at the time of the Second Shinobi World War:
Tsunade in battle:
Her contributions to the war effort and revolutionary reforms to shinobi organization are often regarded as the pivotal elements that lead to Konoha's triumph during the Second Shinobi World War. Tsunade was able to counteract all of Chiyo's poisons and thus significantly reduces Sunagakure's ability to wage war against Konohagakure.
She lost her younger brother Nawaki in the skirmishes and raids that
preempted Konoha's declaration of the Second Shinobi World War.
Tsunade before the war and with Nawaki:
She loves Dan Katō, another renowned Jonin of Konoha, and supports his wish to reform the Hidden Leaf village as its next Hokage.
A renowned Jonin of Konohagakure (Hidden Leaf Village) and a great man.
He deeply loves Konoha and its inhabitants, as well as his younger sister and niece. A wise and honorable man who works to bring justice, he is very knowledgeable about the history of the shinobi world and its suffering. A powerful and persuasive orator, he is well-mannered, well-liked, and skilled in diplomacy.
Infamous for his Reika no Jutsu [Spirit Transformation Technique]
With it he is an infiltration, espionage, reconnaissance, and assassination expert. This versatile S-rank jutsu brings death to countless shinobi. In his day, he is equivalent to a shinobi General for Konoha.
Dan in his prime:
[Still too spoiler-y for the Glossary]
A great story, the author does an incredible job showing how the main character is learning and discovering the world; along with her new powers, and does a good job showing how other characters react to her. There are no spelling or grammatical errors as far as I can see, nor any obvious plot-holes. Wonderful work, and I hope you continue writing it for some time to come!
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I don't know the art of bootlicking so I'll refrain from detailed praises🤣
it's great, just great☺️try licking- I mean reading 😃
Slow paced at first, but the fun type of slow not boring😊
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The world of naruto except The characters actually make sense.
Not especially slow or fast in pace, and the character actions are actually based in logic. The dialog makes sense, and the character interactions are realistic (as realistic as a bunch of super powered ninjas can be) without being boring. Also, another thing, the main character is currently a child, do not expect lewds for a long time, or at all. Also the main character is OP, but not especially so, has abilities but not the knowledge to use them.
ALSO READ THE TAGS, theyre there for a reason.
Also when there isn't combat, or depressing stuff. There's Fluff. A lot of fluff. All in all pretty good.
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Second best Naruto fanfic on this site (the first one being Goddess of Ice). Instead of hardcore training and flashy jutsus, you get a slow burn, emotional fanfic that hits you right in the feel. The lack of progress is a bit grating, but it's justifiable for the well-thought-out and gradual character development.
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I've never written a review before so i'll keep it short but I really like this story and while I havn't read many this is definitely my favourite Naruto Fanfic so far. So I'm excited to see where this goes and keep up the good work.
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I dislike Naruto the Anime. Well not dislike so much but failed to find the fascination with it. Likely because I didn't see the initial story line; that and from what I have seen the animation is not of what you would call the highest quality, though I must admit I have seen a few episodes that were actually interesting. Don't get me started on Mecha-Naruto, swear that was stolen from Inspector Gadjit. Not dissing those that like it. Just saying that's not my cup of tea. (Cowboy Beebop for the win!)
This story is fascinating, I find it clever and a mystery to be unraveled. Eighty chapters in and there is still mystery to be unraveled. A sad girl with little social skills but quite capable as a Shinobu learns her place after being the subject of experiments and apparently a kidnapping. She learns her place in the world in time (and still is) at this point in the story.
I recommend it, even if you're not a Naruto fan. This is not a Naruto story. It is a story set in the Naruto universe which I enjoy.
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it's a slow burn but also very well written. Usually they get boring after tens of chapters, not the case here so far. The characters are interesting. The MC monologue and feelings are also interesting but very mature considering her age.
Give it a shot if you can handle slow stories.
(One of the best Naruto fanfics out there for sure)
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This is by far my favourite fiction I’ve read. I’ll segment my review like I do with other reviews: into Plot, World, Characters and Combat. Because I enjoy the author’s writing style, I will also add a section on it as well. My reviews tend to be long, but I usually only review stories I believe warrant a long review, meaning I think this story is really special.
Plot: 10/10
I consider the plot to be among the most unpredictable among those I’ve read. Normally distancing yourself from common ideas in stories is a bad thing. This is because stereotypes in stories exist because they work, and straying from them usually forces the plot in an awkward direction. I believe you’ll be pleasantly surprised by the directions the author takes the story, and those of you reading Naruto fan-fiction will understand where this deviates from the norm. In the case of this story, which is well-crafted and does not feel rushed at all, I would say the plot is balanced with light and dark themes together with the occasional surprise which you can’t predict. A definite delight to read, in my opinion, and an exceedingly rare delight to find.
World: 9/10
I think the Naruto World is the best world to have a fan-fiction in, and therefore the inherent bias is prevalent in my answer. The world is inherently very dark, and the author has taken liberty to remind us of this in this story. I think the characters are accurately depicted thus far, and the author has a definite respect for the Naruto universe in general. I believe this respect translates to a very coherent and believable Naruto world, which is amazing in my opinion.
Characters: 10/10
The main character of this series is perhaps the most interesting character I have ever read in any story ever. This is likely due to my inexperience in the authors writing style, which definitely amplifies the complexity of their character. The characters actions are rarely completely understood, or we can’t find it until we understand something else. I find myself referring to previous chapters to understand the current main character with more detail. I believe this complex characterization is what drives the story forward.
Combat: 7/10
This isn’t a fighting story. Fights appear and are realized within instants or short amounts of time, which is expected in a realistic rendition of the Naruto World. I am not expecting to be blown away by the combat within this fiction, as it is not a focus of this fiction.
Writing style: 9/10
This fiction is an introspection fiction. There are many things that are improved by writing in this style, but also some caveats. I think characters and the world are vastly improved through introspection. Hearing descriptions of people and objects in the world through introspection adds more meaning to them, which improves the complexity of a world even if it is small. The main benefit (at least the benefit I see from introspection) is also a drawback. Sometimes it feels like nothing is happening in the story because several chapters have occurred without a change in scenery. I would argue that the benefit to the story outweighs this drawback. I am also incredibly biased towards the authors writing style. I would read the first ten chapters and decide for yourself whether you like the writing style or not.
Summary: 9/10
I think this story is worth it to read as a story and an eventual MUST-READ as a Naruto fan fiction. The plot, world, characters and writing style make this story a delight to read, and the combat isn’t really important for this kind of story and the rating is more to honestly market the story to Naruto combat enthusiasts.
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Okay so I am not one for writing reviews, so I will try my best to just write what I don't like about this novel so that the author can understand, and hopefully improve.
Alright so there is no doubt that the Author put a lot of care and details into the book here, but sometimes there is to much like in the beginning there is a whole 8 chapters of her waking up, asking questions, finding a garden, asking more question's, get some of her memory back, and continuing to ask question's, then she explores the rest of the base, and asks more questions, and these are long chapters I don't know the exact amount but it tales some time to read even a single one, do you see the problem? There is just to much of her... thinking stuff. Now all this is not a bad thing it might turn off some readers because they would prefer a more fast paced novel, but it gets a little weird when she leave's and goes into the outside world. She starts to see how brutal the world is (Since the timeline is in the 2nd great Ninja War), and she makes a decision to never reveal her abilities, now not a bad thing in itself, until she starts to avoid even enemies that she would rather kill, but won't because someone might see something that she would rather they not see.
Now also something that the protag says is that she should train to understand her abilities more, but along the way she only meditates and does not ever really train.
Another problem I have with this book is that the Protag is Cautious true, but it's more like paranoia to the point where she won't even have her true hair color out in case it is a recognizable thing about her, now all this is not bad, until you consider the fact that she was abducted at a young age, and imprisonmend with only a little bit of scrolls about Chakra being the only thing she could read, most of the guards outright ignored her, though there are hints of there being crueler guards, so in conclusion she should not even know to hide, as there is no logical reason for her to expect that people would use her as she fears, there has never been an event that would cause her to be suspicious of anyone except the cult. Until now only the cult wanted to trap and experiment on her and so I cannot believe she would think the way she does, because as mentioned, she has no experience with other people and no reason to believe the things she does.
Now the biggest gripe I have with this is her preference to not fight, so that means in this 41 chapter I have read in the last three hours there has been one fight scene in total that involves her. Now I don't know how to say this but the book is great for people who love very long world and character building, now even I love that but as I said earlier there is a little to much of that happening. So in conclusion this is a great story overall, but not to people who like to have action in there book.
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there are ten ratings and all of them are 5 stars what more do you need to know that this is an AMAZING story. The only "negative" or issue you could have with it is the long time it takes the author to release a new chapter. But greatness takes time and I'm happier with it taking longer for an awesome chapter instead of more rushed\unpolished chapters.
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