All the way up to chapter 52, this was shaping up to be a really good novel, with great characters, a good plot, and a very nicely fleshed-out backstory.
Chapters 53 to 74 however, for me, is simply MC getting overdosed on drugs and landing in hippy-land
Chapters 75 to 88 basically explain what really happened while MC was high
chapter 89 was supposed to be MC's comeback, but
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he fainted for the second time
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for an unknown reason, and then the conversation basically got picked up from before that happened, making it basically pointless, and if it's not, then that would mean another mystery, and I'm just done with the mysteries. The plot now is so convoluted that I just can't be bothered to remember it, especially if what happened in hippy-land is canon
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All the way up to chapter 52, this was shaping up to be a really good novel, with great characters, a good plot, and a very nicely fleshed-out backstory.
Chapters 53 to 74 however, for me, is simply MC getting overdosed on drugs and landing in hippy-land
Chapters 75 to 88 basically explain what really happened while MC was high
chapter 89 was supposed to be MC's comeback, but
he fainted for the second time
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Has good potential, but too slow.
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