I will start with the good, then comes the bad and finally my explanation why I think this deserves such a low rating.

Good:

Writing: The writing is acceptable. It is on the level you should demand of someone making money with their writing. As could be expected, it's not Shakespeare, but no one is here in search of Shakespeare. We are all looking for the literary equivalent of fast food. So, this portion of fries will not be the best or among the best you ever had, but you will not get a stomache ache from them.

s*x scenes: I would declare them, if they actually involve the MC for once, easily the best part of this story. If they don't involve the MC, they feel more like they were put there for the shock value.

Misery Porn: If you enjoy misery porn, you can get something out of this. The story seems to delight in going into this area repeatingly.

Bad:

Characters: It's hard to find even one remotely likeable character in the story. I will go over the main ones.

MC: The main character is a horrible mixture of the worst qualities of a general NTR victim paired with the worst qualities of a NTR perpetrator. He is weak-willed, dense, stupid, fragile, scatterbrained, naive, easily manipulated and at the same time an unrepenting rapist with a string of horrible deeds to his name.

But the worst thing is his utterly inconsistent nature, in one paragraph he may make a personal resolution to then go back on it in a paragraph down the page. I'm nearly at the half point of the story and it feels like the character experienced no growth at all. There is no character development. He could be taken from the third volume to be dropped back into the first and there would only be marginal differences.

Instead of the character maturing, learning from his mistakes and coming into his own, he is constantly brought back to the start of the story. So, instead of learning to appreciate the MC through his growth from the pathetic human being into someone more likeable, we get the cheap trick that plays on the reader's empathy to give the MC some sympathy.

FMC: Tbh, I didn't realize Netori was to be the female lead till later on, she felt more like an antagonist than an actual love interest. But she shares the same qualities as her fellow leads. They are all shallow, weak-minded, easily manipulated... well to make the MC being able to manipulate or steal them they simply have to be worse than him and that should tell you everything.

There is no corruption or courting process in this story, every female is a bitch and whore from the start and the only connection they share with the MC is s*x. I think NTR doujinshi have an equal amount of characterization as these females have. Two to three panels with information, and then comes the s*x train. s*x is literally the connecting factor and the glue for every relationship. It's so pathetic.

Antagonists: Every antagonist was essentially a hate sink. They have nothing to them except that you can easily hate them. Most of their powers, skills and accomplishments feel like complete author fiat and rely on the MC holding the idiot ball with both hands. Worst of all, their comeuppance is never even close to equal to the pain they get to inflict or the limelight and victories they get.

All the antagonists are established through victories against the MC, which is a horrible conceptual idea. Instead of using a well-established trope like the worf effect, the story continues to push the protagonist back to the starting line, again and again. Finally, they lose through complete handwaverism.

Other characters: I don't think one genuinely good human being was given any mention in this story. It feels like male characters only exist to either be rapist or be even worse human beings than the MC to make him look better. And females are just there to get f**ked.

Plot: The initial premise and hook of the story is a clear-cut revenge storyline. MC got hurt, MC gets system, MC plans to get revenge.

It's a clear-cut bait and switch here. The premise and hook is thrown away as quickly as possible and the actual story takes it place.

Each victory of the MC comes to feel like a Pyrrhic or even Cadmean victory instead of a real one.

The revenge arc always falls flat and many plot threads established in one volume get dropped or completely forgotten in the next one.

Revenge is also exclusively centered around the male antagonists, and the female part in all of it is generally completely ignored. There are no hard feelings on the side of the MC and he happily takes each and every lying, cheating bitch or whore back into his good graces. Sounds pathetic?

I skipped ahead to look, if it is worth it to battle through the story.

Conclusion: The story gains attention with a false hook and refuses to deliver on the premise it provided. Instead, it goes on a tangent of misery porn, helped on by authorial induced stupidity, and in the end turns into complete whack territory. This story is a worse version of the game Dark Hero Party. If you like ntr and desire something better, play that instead.

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NEVER BE FOOLED BY THE "I WILL STEAL EVERY GIRL"  That's bullsh*t. 

I've read this before on the site. Not really a fun series because all the NTR is in here. If you are a weak-willed person, I don't recommend this. The story... How would I say this... It didn't suit my taste at all, especially the latest volume. I'm done after volume 6. I can't stomach it all in. It just pisses me off every time

The only thing I could give props to is the MC, for not being mentally broken from all of that.

If you're into netorase then this is good for you. And, if you want to torture yourself then I recommend this. That's the feeling that I got from this series. TORTURE.

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Read this on whatsawhizzerwebnovels. com and was loving until the netorare and netorase parts joined in...... absolutely disgusting.

This story actually helped me learn something though, that I really hate netorare, though I apparently have no issue with netori

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It starts with the main character girlfriend cucking him with his best friend and he going suicidal because his life sucks. Now bois, do you think he will overcome his weakness and man up? Do you seriously think he will get revenge? Hahaha you got Rick rolled. He stays the same weak minded guy but with power in his hands that doesn't do sh*t for him. There are other gods playing that little game and they straitght up use their powers to f**k the MC over and his goddess reply is that she can't help him because it's a violation of the rules. Every girl our boi gets cucks him at least one time, there is even some chicks that does that multiple times and there is not retribuition, there isn't character development. This novel is psychologic torture for the main character and the readers. JUST STAY AWAY FROM THIS.

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Funny how the title is "I will steal every girl" but his girls are constantly stolen. Character is such a bitch I wouldn't recommend this to anyone.

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"If Psychological Torture was a novel"

This is the best way I can explain this novel, There are times I want to bang my head into a wall (Which I did) while reading this. 

The best way to describe this is, A Novel for Masochists. 

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Spare yourself the disappointment of reading this story and go look for the other series that are rated higher. The author claims that the low ratings are trolls or other malcontents, but I'd bet most poor ratings are simply cause the story is garbage overall.

It has a passable premise and starts out in a fairly cliched, but acceptable way. However, a few volumes in, you'll realize that the author really has no idea how to properly develop a coherent and consistent MC. His personality and actions bounce all over the map, giving the sense that the author himself doesn't have much of an idea of who the MC is supposed to be.

The author also belongs to the 'fight club' school of literary theory with story arcs hinging on the MC losing everything suddenly and then starting over.

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They is no  Real Netori 

Yes he get Girls but all will betray him and getting steal by others (get them back and they do it again)

MC get ntred over and over again and in Vol. 5 everthing goes to sh*t and He keeps say He will get them back no backborn at all 

Let me warn you If you like Netori or Harem this is not it.

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Girlfriend cucks him, so he rapes his own sister. His mother wants his d*ck, but he chickens out. Gets a s*x point system, so he decides to NTR his best friend back and steal people's girls. Rapes his own sister again in the toilet at karaoke, later watches his own sister be rammed by some random dude that came out of nowhere, looks at the cream pie. Said same random dude also banging his ex-girlfriend.

Sister gets invited out to some orgy-event, doesn't want her to go, she goes and was close to being video recoded, but he charges in with the help of the yakuza and saves her.

huh?

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I come from the future, and if you read this first you need an iron balls, and it will still hurt a lot... but the sh*t is good, I'll tell you in simple, this is netori but the NTR rears its disgusting head in certain places, you must resist and use your brain to be able to get your vanilla medal... I will leave my 5 stars as an offering, and I will answer questions but I will not give spoiler

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