Mark's content relationship with Elizabeth takes a turbulent turn when his past love, with whom he had a bitter history, returns to town. Elizabeth feels threatened, especially since the former flame is now in their class. Complicating matters, the returning ex is dealing with a deteriorating relationship of her own. Mark finds himself navigating the consequences and additional challenges that ensue.
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This is kinda slw paced probably because the author is trying to keep things in mystery. Considering that it's currently in the first book, they probably don't want to reveal too much lest they accidentally reveal some stuff that should not be seen yet.
but I'm fine with it. I only come back from time to time anyway. And this series is honestly the only story I come back everytime to despite my lazy ass.
But anyway this story is overall good. What I like the most is the relationship dynamics. And I believe that's the main focus of the story rather than mafia and sh*ts. Although it's harem, it's not like most harem outthere where the girls all somehow flock to the MC.. At least here, there's struggle. The main heroine is a bit crazy though.. I guess I can expect a character development from her.. But daym, the characters have depth and the interactions felt real..
Keep up the good work author. I whope this series isn't dropped..
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Currently, it's still good.
The pacing is kind of quick but it's presently good overall.
At present, it's about a highschool student who is a little uncaring and easygoing, with slight coldness, and had befriended his exes, with a yandere girlfriend.
This story showed the element of mafia so I think there would be underworld related events here.
I also like the emotional and psychological description of the characters.
The word count is long with an average of 5K which is the reason that causes the pacing to be fast, I think.
However, the author said in one of his note that she or he will revise it.
I saw that he already started shortening his word count.
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This story reads like a bad Chinese language machine translation. It is readable, just really janky. It has terrible grammar and syntax which kills any immersion or enjoyment from reading. To have to re-read something two or three times to parse what's said or extrapolate the meaning from earlier paragraphs is frustrating. The author keeps commenting that he will edit the chapters when someone points it out yet the story is two years old and not one chapter has been edited or has any of the issues helpfully pointed out in the comments been rectified.
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