The reason why I rate this novel 4 star is not because of the plot. The plot is fine and all, and you actually used sentences instead of the "hi!" (Mc) you see on alot of novels that have bad grammars, and thats an improvement. The actual problem im seeing is that you're overusing the word omni, and you could work on your chapter length and grammar, dont know whar else to give for this kind of plot, because there isnt much to be done with it after all, but I like the plot
This story seems kinda self indulgent, so the grammar isnt great. It's legible though and sort of fun to read. Whoever put that 1 star vote probably didn't read past the first paragraph because it wasn't realistic.
this is a complete joke, I was honestly dying of laughter throughout the whole thing due a mix of the bad grammar and absurd plot, definitly worth the read.
This is not a serious novel and its obvious that it is just written for fun by the author. The grammar is a bit bad but it fits in with how the story is written.
Nightmare Fantasy Online.
The newest entry of the mega game corporation “Terra Sol AS” line of world-changing games and a hot new member of the VRMMO-genre.
And now, a young girl tired of reality wishes to obtain a new life
Is very cool and good story but there was no sl*ve cat girl harem member -1 OmniPoint
Bobbi best side character good backstory +2 OmniPoint
Tldr; hot loods, many interest plot twist 13/16 OmniPoints
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The reason why I rate this novel 4 star is not because of the plot. The plot is fine and all, and you actually used sentences instead of the "hi!" (Mc) you see on alot of novels that have bad grammars, and thats an improvement. The actual problem im seeing is that you're overusing the word omni, and you could work on your chapter length and grammar, dont know whar else to give for this kind of plot, because there isnt much to be done with it after all, but I like the plot
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This story seems kinda self indulgent, so the grammar isnt great. It's legible though and sort of fun to read. Whoever put that 1 star vote probably didn't read past the first paragraph because it wasn't realistic.
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this is a complete joke, I was honestly dying of laughter throughout the whole thing due a mix of the bad grammar and absurd plot, definitly worth the read.
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good omnistory and long live omnitruck.
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It's good but prepare for Omni. Also the grammars a bit bad. (This was three stars earlier but it was meant to be four so my apologies.)
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This is not a serious novel and its obvious that it is just written for fun by the author. The grammar is a bit bad but it fits in with how the story is written.
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