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Chapter 55. A Deal Between Man.Dec 22, 2021
Chapter 54. Service Club Opened.Dec 19, 2021
Chapter 53. Very Normal ‘School Days’ Life.Dec 16, 2021
Chapter 52. Joining the Student Council to Create a Club.Dec 14, 2021
Chapter 51. Back to Normal Life. (As Middle Schooler)Dec 12, 2021
Chapter 50. Promise to Meet Again.Dec 10, 2021
Chapter 49. Overpowered But Also Overstupid.Dec 8, 2021
Chapter 48. History of ‘Sato’, Reason and Another Deal.Nov 29, 2021
Chapter 47. Situation Getting Reversed.Nov 19, 2021
Chapter 46. Symphony Of Tragedy. (2)Nov 9, 2021
Chapter 45. Symphony Of Tragedy. (1)Oct 17, 2021
Chapter 44. Escalated Quickly.Oct 11, 2021
Chapter 43. Calm before the Storm.Oct 8, 2021
Chapter 42. Ravel Situation and The Dragon Gods Plan.Oct 5, 2021
Chapter 41. Alliance Meeting and Battle Showcase Again.Oct 4, 2021

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Evelena21

Status: c45

Nov 6, 2021

[Final Impression: Great story and character development but it just did not suit my taste.... however this novel deserves some recognition on the amount of work and thought the author placed.]

[My Journey in Reading this....]

This has been on my waitlist for so long due to the negative reviews I have red on other platforms. However, I decided to give it a try after knowing that this was comedic in nature. I love things that are carefree with no deep drama and tragedy going on. So thinking about that while at the same time expecting a fun op MC who is an extreme siscon, I decided to give it a try while disregarding the negative reviews..... or so I thought... which I will not know until later on...

After going through the first few chapters, I was not disappointed. It was carefree, free from tragedy and stuff like that. I thought it was comedic in nature, and the twin's obsession with each other made me love this story more...

Things go on and I start to see what the negative reviews are saying... the MC is stupid... Though I pushed through and ignored this expecting it would be fixed later on... and I was not disappointed... the author listened and developed the MC. He became smarter and stronger later on in the chaps. It was a pain going through that development... If not for the twin's obsessive love for each other, I might have dropped it like the others. I just love the way they love each other... it was extreme and new to me... and I loved it!

However... as I read more chapters... I start to realize that this was actually not the fanfic that I thought it was, wherein there would be no extensive drama and tragedy... however, it was actually the opposite... It had lots of drama and tragedy as the story progressed... I honestly got stressed reading those things.... that was why I hate those kinds of novels... even if they are interesting they are still a pain as they tend to play with your emotions.. which I don't like.

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Expecting to see more of the twin's scene, I decided to read chapters 35-45 on the other platforms (ScribbleHub) he uploaded it... and I have to say a lot of improvements were made however..... the author broke my last motivation for reading this..... tragedy starts to get more extreme and the obsessive love that the MC had started to disappear... he even mentions at the comment section that something bad will happen to the relationship of the twins... 'redemption' the author says at chapter 44 I think?... anyway, that was the last straw for me... that spoiler alone is enough for me to see that their love will not be the same... as the way I love them like in the early chap... the MC starts to distrust her sister and his love lessens... then the tragedy happens the sister gets kidnapped and so on... that ends chapter 45 which is the latest as of now (Nov 6, 2021). All of this was logical and great for the development and story.... It was fantastic... which is why I gave it 4 star for. But it was just not for me...

At this point, I think that the sister's true nature will get revealed and all the bad things she did in order to protect his brother will get known... and tragedy might happen again which I personally don't like but still great for the development of the story. The MC might distance himself and even hate her... while the sister tries to redeem herself... just like when the author said 'redemption' will happen in the future chap... I honestly don't like it if this is the direction that the author plans to take which is why I decided to drop it for now until things get better... though if the author decided to choose the route where the brother still accepts his sister despite knowing the manipulation she did (which is done in order to protect her brother) then I might continue it.... since one of the motivation, why I read this despite the negative things that happened, was his relationship with his twin sister.....

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Despite the things that happened so far, I'll try to be more constructive from now on.

First of all, I can see that the author tried to go for the comedic route at the start which in my opinion was quite funny at times. However, as the chapters go on it starts to go dark which ruined it for me, but was great for the development and story.

Grammar was okay... though it can be confusing at times. I recommend using Grammarly if you don't have an editor.

The idea for the story development was fantastic... though the author failed to properly implement that idea as things were written in a forced manner in the early chaps. But the idea was great!! even if It did not suit my taste in the later chaps...

Character design... it was well done. I haven't watched the anime where Satou came from however I honestly fell in love with Satou's character... though her brother's character (the mc) was quite.... disappointing. A massive improvement did happen later on which was great. However, that led to the consequence of lessening his love for his sister which is a great disappointment in my part... especially since I Ioved her character...

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Overall this fanfic a roller coaster of emotions... I hated it as it tried to play with my heart... I wanted to drop it so that it would stop stressing me. However, I f****ng fell in love with one of the characters (Satou) so decided to push through but... the author starts to play with me again by using Satou. That broke me and I decided to end my suffering here.... for the sake of my health I would not read the upcoming chaps and come back after the drama is finished so that I don't have to wait in agony waiting for his relationship to be fixed.

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-It was great and keep up the good work author!!

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