A/N: Newbie author here! I wrote this synopsis in haste so it might change in the future. I have a rough outline of the plot progression, but nothing has been set in stone! PLEASE NOTE: I explore the story as I write!!! I don't claim my story to be good even though I have burned my body, heart, and soul!
SYNOPSIS:
Like waking up from a dream, Ben was transmigrated into a fantasy world; in a cruel forest, which was hell in itself.
But, after fighting death many times, he finally came out of it and found a human town after 6 months. He also got to meet his 'family' of this world.
But something was wrong with his body...
Why was every woman attracted to him? And why their men thanked him even though he cucked them?
Whatever may be the reason, it's good for him, so he doesn't care.
Why would he, when he can just **** almost anyone he likes?
Embark on a lewd journey with Ben...
WARNING: Just as the name suggests, this is a lewd wish-fulfillment novel. It also contains incest. So you have been warned.
Note:
1. English isn't my first language.
2. Don't take this story too seriously.
3. No NTR, no r*pe.
4. Pure wish-fulfillment novel.
5. MC is not Evil.
6. MC is not so smart like those of cultivation novels. Though he isn't dumb.
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Tags: Mother-son, Aunt-nephew, Bro-con Cousin, etc.
- Chapter 58 – Holy MissionOct 24, 2021
- Chapter 57 – Get Them!Oct 20, 2021
- Jack is stupid…Oct 4, 2021
- Chapter 56 – Pound Her to Oblivion (R-18)Oct 1, 2021
- Chapter 55 – Different Sensations (R-18)Sep 29, 2021
- Chapter 54 – Natalia in Bliss (R-18)Sep 28, 2021
- Chapter 53 – Let’s Apologize ProperlySep 27, 2021
- Chapter 52 – Unending CuriositySep 26, 2021
- Chapter 51 – NostalgiaSep 25, 2021
- Chapter 50 – A SparkSep 23, 2021
- Chapter 49 – Village Chief No MoreSep 21, 2021
- Chapter 48 – RiriSep 18, 2021
- Questions that I will answer throughout the novelSep 13, 2021
- Chapter 47 – On their way to the toy shopSep 12, 2021
- Chapter 46 – The FreeloaderSep 2, 2021
- Content Warning
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Hiatus - Updated Oct 24, 2021
Last updated 2 years ago
- 1234 reading
- 183 plan to read
- 20 completed
- 38 paused
- 64 dropped
This is somewhat of a place holder review until I've read everything, but so far it does deserve the review. It's pretty decent slice of life smut.
My only advice to the author is that you could work more on the little details. What type of dress do people wear? Is it medieval like poet shirts and the grandfather of pants? Do they wear Victorian dress? Or is it togas or Chinese qipaos or Japanese kimonos? Then what is the architecture like? Same qualifiers there. Is the road paved or cobbled stone or packed dirt? Are there carriages around? What are they like? What does this adventurer gear look like? And the food he's ate? What does that taste like? What does it feel like to eat mana as he does? These little details are where you're weakest at.
The syntax is pretty good. There are a number of errors here or there, but otherwise no issue there. The pacing is so far okay, but I'm not far in enough to comment. I will say that the story boarding I can sense is pretty decent. I like your use of foreshadow here or there too throw in some seemingly small thing in the scenes. The smut was an okay starter, but I don't care much about it since it wasn't a harem girl.
Your combat is a little weak. You again need more detail. The scene doesn't read right. It is hard to imagine them. But it just needs a little more feeling and presence. Describe that proprioception triggers. Describe abilities and such better, but it is still early to call on that.
Keep it up, man!
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Damn this is good if you came for the smut + incest you are in the good novel 😂
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A very good story, with a good plot. Try to read this story. The r18 scene are good and the MC is strong.
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