Very slipshod plot and writing. Writer is obviously not good at English and the plot is very scuffed, in fact the writer may be making it up as she/he goes along. Sh*t happens without any reason and can get very confusing. Do not believe the others in the review section. Currently, this is the only one star review. I honestly don't believe that this is so popular, I don't think it deserves its high ratings and attention. 

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Grammar could use some work and I was hoping the story would be better than what "To be a power in the shadows" did... it wasn't. 

Are all secret organizations stories just about some guy founding it for the purpose of fighting something made up but turns out to be real and then using their absurd luck and powers to bullsh*t their way through everything?

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Seeing as there’s no review on this novel as of now I’ll try with one to convince the people reading this to pick it up. Secret organization is like what the synopsis tells you. The setting is in a some what futuristic earth with superpowers sort of like MHA and the main character is a overpowered, hidden strength, organization building little girl. If you like that sort of stuff especially overpowered and organization building this novels for you. Greatly inspired by power in the shadows and probably the index world the setting and characters are fun and perfect for what it is. 

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Great read so far!

The MC is an overpowered girl who create her own organisation. It's quite similar to "To be a power in the shadows", because the MC bullsh*t some excuse to her subordinate but they turned out to be true 😂

The story is quite lighthearted even though it include human experiment and corruption, but it's overall funny and entertaining.

The story also is a yuri story, but it's not the main plot. But keep it in mind incase you are not into yuri.

I'm really looking forward for this novel and I hope the author won't drop it!

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Quite good story for relaxing without thinking. Quite bad story if you  you're looking for smth with good world building... (then don't even try, otherwise you will be in rage by every chapter).

If we compare it with "power in the shadows", then there is more plot, but less humor and pathos.

No yuri so far (no hints as well).

Author's English is very limited. No complex sentence, no idioms. Only basics taken from the elementary course for foreigners. And no improvement over time.

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Read if you don't think too much about everything. Don't bother if you're one of those people who like to analyze stuff and think through all the steps. 

Just take everything at face value and don't think deeper. That'll help you enjoy it more.

The grammar is... confusing. 

The MC seems like the type to just drift around and go 'eh?!' when something goes wrong. Then goes dues ex machina and saves the day. 

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Honestly, I don't have much to complain about. I have loved every single development  the author made. Originally I thought this novel would fall off, as I thought that it would encounter the multiple flaws that occur when you have such an overpowered cast on the same team, however that doesn't  happen. 

This isn't the kind of novel that solves every single problem the cast encounters in 50 chapters and then struggles to keep the story interesting or just goes down the path of slice of life. The story was constantly interesting, the characters are not too many in number or too few and adequately developed throughout the story.

I am kind of skeptical of the very likely upcoming  "yuri content" as I do not know if it will fit very well with the story as a whole as I said in the paragraph above (the slice of life part) . Maybe someone who has read the 60 or so advanced chapters that you can get on his patreon can answer that question.

The one thing that keeps this novel from being close to perfect are the sometimes occurring grammar errors. They aren't very major, the usual "being to lazy to add one 's' to nouns  to pluralize " and so on.

So, I award you, kind sir, the greatest honor I can bestow. A 5 star rating with a cherry on top.

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I just found this amazing story not too long ago. It made me so engrossed in this plot and twist. I love how Naomi develeoped and her character. This is amazing, and I cant stop reading once I found your story. You created such a great book! But unfortunately why did you stopped last year? I wanna know the continuation please. I know I ask something crazy, but I really fallen in love with your story. I love how mischa and naomi became lover and much more. I like the fighting description. And I wonder how much power will Naomi emited once she found out what her power really is. And I bet her hand will grow out once again. She’s the Dreamer afterall. I hope you have a healthy body and can continue this series. Thanks for making this story. You did a good work! Must be rough to write all of this. 

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While this author seems to have a fun idea, the writing is so bad that I can’t get past it. It’s clear that the author isn’t a native or proficient English speaker, and that makes the writing very jarring. Pass

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This one's pretty good. Not too extraordinary and not too bad. It has its good moments and it has others that are not so great or even sloppy that sometimes leaves disappointment. But it's unique enough for me to continue reading it despite its numerous plot failures. 

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