It is really good for a fan-fiction based on a kids show... my only demerit is too many card harem members that require extra screen time. Needs more plot and less fluff? [ie dont need to focus on there cuddletime as much] But otherwise its pretty fun.

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Meh, I have no major complaints, it just does nothing well.  

The deck theme is okay.  There is a minor dependance on cards that didn't exist until after GX.  Not as bad as some yugioh fanfics are in that regard.  

There is essentially no real plot.  They're literally just running through the anime episodes and making the self insert deal with most of them himself.  It just feels shallow though.  

The harem is a mix bag.  It takes up an increasingly large amount of time as we go on.  It's not bad, but I'd rather have a plot.  The state of affairs is usually, one chapter of battle, then one chapter of various female duel spirits and possibly one of the female protagonists sleeping in the protagonists bed.  No actual s*x in the chapters I read.

The protagonist is bland.  Nothing to turn me off, but nothing I wanted to continue reading for.  The draw for the series seems to be the harem. 

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